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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't believe I've ever had so much fun reading a story. Your phraseology, your pace, your humor and the utter REALNESS of this had me on the edge of my seat and sometimes falling off with laughter. I could never say enough good things about this fic, never. I am marking it to read over and over. You really tell a story well. Now that it's all over I feel like I've had a great big dose of dark chocolate after a day out with my best friends. Kudoes to you for taking me to live in your world awhile. The trip went without a single hitch. Loved this, absolutely loved this.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey you! I'm in sore needin' of some updatin'! I know you're there - I've seen you reviewin' 'round these parts hahahaha!
Hope to see you soon!
Hope to see you soon!
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww he’s being all helpful! Sexy nerd is the shiznid :)
Oh noes! What’s wrroooonnnggg with him?!?
Lol – once again :) Cloud’s little side train of thoughts are so funny :D He is such a CUTIE!
Roofies?! O.o Oh that would be *funny* until he got totally dismembered in the morning that is . . . ;)
*jawdrop* That was HOT. Mmmmmm … those two are perfect :)
Awww! Queer eye! I’d forgotten about that show. I need a gay friend – like pronto !
Ohhh lala Labret! That’d be adorably punk on him!
Okay it won’t let me review that last chapter so we’re gonna have to make this a double!
Hah – Seph is so human :) I love the her reasons / his reasons bit :D
Oh wow – nice! Sephy has his fantasies too! Those two really need to get over themselves and just jump each other :P
Oh Zack :P While the nakedness is appreciated . . . okay that’s all I got - carry on ;)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! He’s being protective already :D
The movie was adorable. The kiss was totally hot. They are soooooo perfect. Cloud – what the hell did you just say?!
Wait . . . smoking shoe imprints? That can’t be good . . . :S
Oh no. Nononononono. This had better not be one of those stereotypical we need to talks :S That would crush my fangirlish heart and dreams!
:D Psycho is just . . . brilliant. Way to totally kill the mood in the cutest way ever!
Love how they act to get Cloud out of the building ^^ So cute - although not something that would work on a constant basis . . . hmmmm - well - they're nothing if not resourceful so I'm sure they'll be fine :)
Uhhhh.... I think I just swallowed my tongue. Yep - good thing I use my *fingers* to type then eh? That was hot hot hot hot HOT. Period. Exclaimation mark. Bold. Italicised. Underlined. HOT. That was *AWESOME*. They are, as previously mentioned approximately 51 billion times, adorable. I lovvvveee them! :) Oh citrus, how I adore when there is an actual story with developed characters underlying thee!
Okay the entire last chapter there was jus delicious. Seriously. And now I have successfully spent the half of the day previously designated for doing my epidemiology progect reading this :S So screwed. But entirely worth it! Is there a way to like set an update watch on this? I know on ff.net it's possible but I never really played with aff.net? Must figure out! Otherwise I suppose I could just bug your lemon beta to let me know. That sounds like a plan :D Awesome.
Oh noes! What’s wrroooonnnggg with him?!?
Lol – once again :) Cloud’s little side train of thoughts are so funny :D He is such a CUTIE!
Roofies?! O.o Oh that would be *funny* until he got totally dismembered in the morning that is . . . ;)
*jawdrop* That was HOT. Mmmmmm … those two are perfect :)
Awww! Queer eye! I’d forgotten about that show. I need a gay friend – like pronto !
Ohhh lala Labret! That’d be adorably punk on him!
Okay it won’t let me review that last chapter so we’re gonna have to make this a double!
Hah – Seph is so human :) I love the her reasons / his reasons bit :D
Oh wow – nice! Sephy has his fantasies too! Those two really need to get over themselves and just jump each other :P
Oh Zack :P While the nakedness is appreciated . . . okay that’s all I got - carry on ;)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! He’s being protective already :D
The movie was adorable. The kiss was totally hot. They are soooooo perfect. Cloud – what the hell did you just say?!
Wait . . . smoking shoe imprints? That can’t be good . . . :S
Oh no. Nononononono. This had better not be one of those stereotypical we need to talks :S That would crush my fangirlish heart and dreams!
:D Psycho is just . . . brilliant. Way to totally kill the mood in the cutest way ever!
Love how they act to get Cloud out of the building ^^ So cute - although not something that would work on a constant basis . . . hmmmm - well - they're nothing if not resourceful so I'm sure they'll be fine :)
Uhhhh.... I think I just swallowed my tongue. Yep - good thing I use my *fingers* to type then eh? That was hot hot hot hot HOT. Period. Exclaimation mark. Bold. Italicised. Underlined. HOT. That was *AWESOME*. They are, as previously mentioned approximately 51 billion times, adorable. I lovvvveee them! :) Oh citrus, how I adore when there is an actual story with developed characters underlying thee!
Okay the entire last chapter there was jus delicious. Seriously. And now I have successfully spent the half of the day previously designated for doing my epidemiology progect reading this :S So screwed. But entirely worth it! Is there a way to like set an update watch on this? I know on ff.net it's possible but I never really played with aff.net? Must figure out! Otherwise I suppose I could just bug your lemon beta to let me know. That sounds like a plan :D Awesome.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lolz! This is hilarious :D Hahaha - I love how Cloud goes off in his head like that. Zack and Cloud make me so happy - their personalities just work so well together :P Can't wait until Sephy is physically in the story :) Awesome - time to read on.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Homg I love Cloud and his mother! Haha and the Queer Bait shirt :D So cute!
¡§Dying on the battlefield, his pants would be tight and his ass would look amazing.¡¨ Fabulous. Seriously funny! Sooooo happy that my good friend recommended this story ¡V you are quite the writer ƒº I kinda want his *entire* wardrobe O.o
Hah ¡V flinstone vitamins and condoms :) Awesome combination :D Made me grin like whoa. Awwwwwww! Poor Cloud ¡V *hugggggssss* - very smart mother though ;) Already knows her son is destined to be a uke :P That has to be the best coming out ever! They are so adorable and understanding :D:D:D:D:D
Okay that¡¦s embarrassing ^^; Even with his mother being so very understanding . . . Eesh. Thin walls are the devil :(
Oh geeze . . . I *reeallllllyyy* hope Seph isn¡¦t a huge jacktard in this :S Cloud has to get his man!
¡§Dying on the battlefield, his pants would be tight and his ass would look amazing.¡¨ Fabulous. Seriously funny! Sooooo happy that my good friend recommended this story ¡V you are quite the writer ƒº I kinda want his *entire* wardrobe O.o
Hah ¡V flinstone vitamins and condoms :) Awesome combination :D Made me grin like whoa. Awwwwwww! Poor Cloud ¡V *hugggggssss* - very smart mother though ;) Already knows her son is destined to be a uke :P That has to be the best coming out ever! They are so adorable and understanding :D:D:D:D:D
Okay that¡¦s embarrassing ^^; Even with his mother being so very understanding . . . Eesh. Thin walls are the devil :(
Oh geeze . . . I *reeallllllyyy* hope Seph isn¡¦t a huge jacktard in this :S Cloud has to get his man!
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOLz - his mother is helping him figure out how to seduce his *general*?! Hilarious. Original. Brilliant. Hahaha - Cloud is such an adorable space cadet! Erm . . .perhaps his mother should have kept the wheel . . .
Okay eww. 5 fricking 30 breakfast?! Good lord – I wasn’t even *asleep* by 5:30 am last night!?! I’d DIE.
Awwww! I want one! Psycho is so cute :)
Andddddd . . . enter the Sephy!
Okay eww. 5 fricking 30 breakfast?! Good lord – I wasn’t even *asleep* by 5:30 am last night!?! I’d DIE.
Awwww! I want one! Psycho is so cute :)
Andddddd . . . enter the Sephy!
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww – Cloud is such a fanboy :) I love how you write him so OOC but still strangley IC at the same time? Doesn’t really make all that much sense to say it out loud but in my head it makes sense?
Oh my – the tension is simply rolling off the poor boy as he stands there :S Think of something! Think od something unique and cute and awesome and most importantly quick!
. . . . . well that was . . . original? Actually really cute :) It’s like saying – ‘ I want to know you as the person not the hero’ . Hot.
Awwwww – cheer up emo kid! You made an impression at least! Probably a quirky favourable one at that! He certainly has placed himself on the radar – and he made everyone smile and laugh!
Oh wow – Cloud certainly knows how to share :)
YAAAAAYYYYY! Seph is cool and nice and awesome and *pant pant – gotta remember to breathe* Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! So cute those two!
Oh my – the tension is simply rolling off the poor boy as he stands there :S Think of something! Think od something unique and cute and awesome and most importantly quick!
. . . . . well that was . . . original? Actually really cute :) It’s like saying – ‘ I want to know you as the person not the hero’ . Hot.
Awwwww – cheer up emo kid! You made an impression at least! Probably a quirky favourable one at that! He certainly has placed himself on the radar – and he made everyone smile and laugh!
Oh wow – Cloud certainly knows how to share :)
YAAAAAYYYYY! Seph is cool and nice and awesome and *pant pant – gotta remember to breathe* Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! So cute those two!
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hold his booze like a pirate! I am sooooooooo remembering that one :D
I love his mirror conversations :) Too cute.
Hahaha – oh dears? What will he choose?! Oh and hung-over Zack makes me smile :D
Okay . . . that is DISGUSTING. But it certainly… erm makes the reader feel the experience?
CLOUD – you TEASE! That was awesome ;)
Haha – that’s . . . an interesting group of songs! I can’t wait to see how the mighty general reacts!
Oh wow. They certainly are . . . thorough? Yaayyy! Seph likes!
I love his mirror conversations :) Too cute.
Hahaha – oh dears? What will he choose?! Oh and hung-over Zack makes me smile :D
Okay . . . that is DISGUSTING. But it certainly… erm makes the reader feel the experience?
CLOUD – you TEASE! That was awesome ;)
Haha – that’s . . . an interesting group of songs! I can’t wait to see how the mighty general reacts!
Oh wow. They certainly are . . . thorough? Yaayyy! Seph likes!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're right, it was OC, but it didn't ruin the story at all. I loved it. Really fuckin' funny. XD QUEERBAIT! It doesn't matter if that song is fake or not, I'll be singing that for a week.
Much love,
Curio
Much love,
Curio
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gawd. What the hell, I've never read a fanfiction were Cloud was such a.... such a.... was such a damned faggot. For Christs sake you got him singing Spice Girls. There were parts were I wanted to shoot you for making him such a flamboyant fairy. There were parts I wanted to shoot him for being a wussy wanker. There were parts were I wanted to shoot myself for reading such a gay story. I f-ing love it. Most especially the story behind run bitches run. I hope to see an update soon.