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Okay so I finally have some free time to write a review after giving up working on my own fanfiction as writing while sick just isn't seeming to happen. ANYWAY I have to tell you... I have become a complete fangirl of this fic... I can't help it! And to see them finally together I couldn't help but to have a total fangirl moment and squeal. LOL I just wanted to tell you that you are a wonderful writer and I look forward to every update you make as well as the sequel because again... I've become a Blonde Ambition fangirl. I can't WAIT to hear Cloud's Mother's reaction to THIS NEWS! WHOOT!

Oh! Oh! Oh! Please tell me this isn't the end. I've never read a story as original or intriguing as yours, and I have read plenty, let me tell ya! I don't know why, but hopefully you'll get over whatever bump on the road you've hit and update this masterpiece soon. Till then.

I gotta tell you: I SQUEEEALED when I saw you had updated.
This chapter had my jaw on the floor - not kidding. I think I burned up ten Exactas just on the makeout scene alone.
I've also reread it (not just THAT scene, but the chapter in it's entirety - I SWEAR!) not once, but TWICE.
That last little bit there at the end.. the "report"? Yeah. Kinda fuckin' scary. Had me all feelin' feelings of doom and dread there for a bit. I mean, hot snot... you get caught up in Seph and Cloud's swirly pink hot tub of bliss so easily you forget the 'reality' of their whole situation. It was good of you to remind us.. adds a whole lotsa mo' dimension.
Oh, and that picture? YOU KNOW THE ONE.
YEAH.
That's all I gotsta say, 'bout that.
-Savannah

*drools uncontrolably*

you are a master!

I so loved this chapter everything from the convo with Cam in the morning to the end report from the guards on duty seemed perfect.

T____T

That by the way, are tears of happiness. I'm just channelling Cloud. I am really happy. Abso-fucking-lutely happy. It used to be that I played Boomtown Rats "I Don't Like Mondays" because I hate Mondays, but I'm in love with Mondays now that you updated. No really. Also that you drew not one, not two but three ass-whooping pictures of SephCloud lovin'. -squish-

Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou.

Oh my fucking-Jesus-humpin'-little-Marry's-lamb-Christ! Love, that was so unbelieavably HOT! I was near orgasmic to see you'd updated and almost tripped over my own typing fingers in my hurry to read this! It was an awsome chapter, hon. Your quirky sense of humor, present even in Seph and Cloud's bedroom, made these last few minutes a real treat. I am so looking forward to reading more!
P.S.
Cloud's socks and the report at the end were a LOVELY touch, darling. Update again soon! Kisses!

okay so i actually set up an account here just so i could leave a review for your story!!!! lol. omigod i love it and have been stalkin it since chapter one. adorably gay teen cloud, holding on to his virginity for a certain uptight green eyed sex god....nothin i havent seen before. but the way you make them interact with eachother, especially cloud when he's pining over his lil' sephy, absolutely amazing. your skills as a writer when it comes to this otp have truly brightened up my day!!! i've told several friends to stalk this story, dont no if they reviewed tho....

N E way, please keep up the great work, i'll give u a 100 plus reviews if thats what it takes for u to update faster!!! This story has become the highlight of my boring academic life. so much better than pesky things like homework,studing, socializing with real people etc LOL!!!!

Teeth imprints, huh?
MUHAHAHAHAA, fucking hilarious! What an awesome chapter. Awww, and the sock incident was so sweet!
I'm glad you're thinking about a Sequel. This story really should be far from over. I wanna know what Momma Strife has to say! YAY! *rubs hands*
By the way, your drawings are beautiful!
Keep up the good work. Every new chapter brightens up my day!
Ha, and talk about quitting your job to concentrate solely on fanfics and pics... I would be one of your most loyal customers!

WOHo, much love for this chapter^_^

(Fucking squirrels) Giggle.

Keep the good work roll'in.