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Hey, there – I’m calmer this time ;) Another major love, how quickly you turn out updates – that whole ‘raging at life’ thing doesn’t have to last a long time. So: this chapter was in-cred-ible! Another fine appearance from Psycho, who I would adopt in a heartbeat – “Christ Almighty!” had me cracking up. I love that you’ve melded the FFVII-verse with the regular world, you know, Subway and TimeWeek and cursing, just all of it. Makes it seem so realistic :D
Okay, you had me very, very worried for a little while there – Seph wanting to ‘talk’? Ouch – I was preparing for the gasp-worthiness of Cloud being dumped unceremoniously for whatever particular reason, so when the ‘talk’ turned into an actual talk, and a sensible one at that, I was very relieved :P And the results! God you’re good at lemon! This is the second time in two days I’ve read a lemon that made me go, ‘wow!’, because in the hands of virtually anyone else, it would have just been unbridled smut, and not necessarily in the good way ;P. The way you were able to incorporate the emotion, as well as demonstrating the mindlessness of the whole thing, just made it interesting, for lack of a better word.
I squiiirmed when Seph was asking the questions of Cloud XP Oh, it hurt, but he’s awesome – the possessiveness is wonderful. Haha, and that last bit freaked me out! The switching to target, the running commentary on their every move! Holy crap, that’s what he’s in for? That’s what they do? I mean, it makes sense, but jeeze – I hope Cloud doesn’t find out 0_0
So basically, another awesome chapter! I look forward to the next one, as always!

i love this story!!!
i really hope u keep going with it

Yay! The boy got his man! Or is it the other way around? Nevermind :D. Will you be illustrating the kissing scene? It's really, really, really, hot. *fans self*. Sephiroth the sly dog, feeling up Cloud that way, and Cloud loves it too. If I'm already hot and bothered by them snogging, I have no idea what will happen when they really get it on. This is a riot to read~ you made this SephCloud fangirl uber happy today.

Oh, love! The fat that you'd updated this practically made my day! It was a more than awsome chapter. The anointment before the party was especially amusing! As was the scene where poor Max found out our beloved General fancied going commmando! I was in stitches by that point, really I was! The karaoke was a great idea too. Too bad it wasn't Cloud who got to moon the audience! Hehehe...Anyway, I really hope you update again soon! I loved the small part you wrote in Zack and Sephiroth's point of view and wish you'd consider adding more such moments in the future. The kiss was...hot, as cliche as that may sound. It was a prequel of things to come, in my opinion, and damn worth the wait! Kisses, hon!

Hi, there - wow :D I finally registered with affnet with the sole fucking purpose of reviewing this, because I've been reading since chapter five, and it's physically harmed me to hold in my glee and not shower it upon you. This is, without a doubt, the best damn fic I have ever, ever read. I look forward to each chapter with my nerves, literally, humming. I am humming. I am so excited for the next one, and so damn enraged (at life, not you) that I have to wait at *all* to get it. Your sense of humour hooked me, first of all - I was just skimming with disinterest, because too often the multi-chaptered stories on here are a load of bollocks, and then there was this awesome Cloud doing what you get him to do, and I was gone :P The characterisation of *everyone* causes me spasms of delight, because even in an OOC setting, you make them all incredibly IC, even Cloud with his bouts of yester-emo. Although, it feels trite labelling his occasional dark thoughts as emo - I adore the way you've given him these real fears, it's so easy to *feel* them when you're reading. Zack = love, absolutely endlessly. He's a fave character of mine, and I pretty much want to worship your shoes for making him like you have - I've never enjoyed reading about him more than I do in this. Sephiroth is absolutely wonderful - I love that you've given glimpses into his mind, being able to see that he likes Cloud too, instead of just suffering along with the 'does he, doesn't he??' stuff with Cloud - although, it's pretty safe to say that was aaaaall taken care of with *this* chapter. Thank you for making them awesome - thank you for introducing the weirdness with the footprints in the brick - thank you for just absolutely making my day every time I see that there's a new chapter. Your style is gorgeous, your grammar/spelling is beautiful, you've just made this utterly incredible fic that I actually can't rave about enough. I'm kind of stumped, have run out of steam, but there's still so much I want to say. It's been too long since I got fired up like this, and I love you for it :D Seriously - counting down the days til the next one. And I will giggle and clap my hands over my mouth, and slam my head against the keyboard, and clap, and OHMYGOD, I nearly forgot Cam and Psycho! Holy crap, woman, how the hell do you make an OC that awesome?! I *hate* OCs, OCs are *shit*, in all my experiences but *one* other, they have detracted from the original setting, they muddy the waters, I avoid giving them any limelight in my own fics, BUT I ADORE CAM AND PSYCHO, AND ALL THE SOLDIERS NOW THAT I COME TO THINK OF IT - AND NURSE WHATSERNAME - TO THE ABSOLUTE ENDS OF THE EARTH. I've read this story... three times now. Yep. That's how much I love it. There's no part that doesn't delight me. So! Going to hush now, go get some much-needed sleep - I stayed up late to read this, another sign of my adoration since I am a sleep-whore who can't function on less than ten hours - and I just hope this goes straight to your veins and encourages you, and that you believe even a fraction of everything I just said, because it's aaaaaall true! (PS, sorry for the babbling review ^_^;)

Hi, I'm the suthor..Ummm Wierd reviewing my own story but I wanted to communicate a bit with you fucking sexy ass reviewers.

And my god, yeah. Is it nerdy to say that you made me cry? Well, you did.

I just wanna let you know that I was really, really nervous about posting chapter 8. I worked it on for about..my god, everyday for almost a month, even at work haha (this chapter was mostly written on napkins). I was shy about putting up the kiss, kept wondering if it too soon? Was it too cheesy? Was it just too much? Ah!

But the fact that you guys liked it this much.. I'm really happy.

And I'll say that Sephiroth kept trying to convince me to do more, more, more! But I was like, 'Can it, General! He's just a boy!' Then Sephiroth was like, 'But I'm fucking 22! I'm a man! I have needs!'

And then I got him the hell out of there before he burned the place down.

Anywho, next chapter will come as quickly as I can be satisfied with it. I don't plan on dying tragically before you all can properly adore and enjoy it.

*sqeals like a school-girl*
Oh that was absolutely awesome! You don't know what PAINS I went through until you FINALLY updated!!!
No, really! Thank you so much for another great chapter. I dearly love this cute (and kinky) pair. Oh, all these naughty images in my head! I'm really excited how their relationship will develop! I love every second of this story. I am BEGGING you to update fast!
100000000 Kudos!

lol giggle, Well peeing on Sephy is one from of claiming him lol

Wonder who saw Sephy/Cloud kissing?

I hope you update soon, like you use to.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wont lie - I totally screamed at The Point Of Makeout. I screamed and hooted and hollered for our sweet sensuous young Cloud.
Oh MAN. You are still insanely brilliant - and don't EVER SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN!!!!!! You disappeared for far too long young missus! Next time, a fair amount of butt-booting will be in order!
But yes! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
BOOM SHAKA-LAKA!!

This is the most awesome Cloud/Seph story I have ever had the pleasure to read. You have a very refreshing way of writing. Your Cloud character really cracks me up. He is LOVELY! I really enjoy your Seph as well. He is very unique and I love it that you make him really human and acting his age. The Slang idea is brilliant.
I seriousely can't wait for the next update. Please HURRY THE FUCK UP!!!! Just kidding ;)
Your story has me hooked somewhat fierce!