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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story. I was a big fan of your oc Jexebel. The way you also portrayed Vincent was done well. I really liked the internal dialougue that was going on with both characters. I wondered what would have happened had they had a kid towards the end and figured that that would be a story all on its own. The fight scenes were excellent as well. Thanks for brightening up my day with this fic. ^_^
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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That was actually pretty epic! I loved it, great job! And the ending was awesome too. LOL! Yuffie and Reno, of course.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shit. I didn't think I'd like this. But then I read the first chapter..then the second...third..forth...and to now. Can't wait for the next XD I hope chaos comes out to play now.
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. Um.. wow.
Holy shit there's a lot of awesomeness going on hahaha. That whole Quietus/Chaos thing? Yeah? Yeah. Well that's BADASS. You hear me? BAD.ASS.
That whole Weiss/Nero scene went crazyfast.. not necessarily confusing but DAMN, haha. It was like some major crash-landing of "WTF!?" and "OHNOOOOOZ!!"
I loved it though; it was just so fucking crazy. I think I seriously laughed out loud while reading, and said something along the lines of: "where the shit did THEY come from!?"
You rock, you rock.
I've actually got to get ready for work right now - it's 'bout five a.m. my time - but I'll be back. Need to pack up mah miso soup and scrub mah face... wake up the kid, all that.
HOLLA!
Savannah.
Holy shit there's a lot of awesomeness going on hahaha. That whole Quietus/Chaos thing? Yeah? Yeah. Well that's BADASS. You hear me? BAD.ASS.
That whole Weiss/Nero scene went crazyfast.. not necessarily confusing but DAMN, haha. It was like some major crash-landing of "WTF!?" and "OHNOOOOOZ!!"
I loved it though; it was just so fucking crazy. I think I seriously laughed out loud while reading, and said something along the lines of: "where the shit did THEY come from!?"
You rock, you rock.
I've actually got to get ready for work right now - it's 'bout five a.m. my time - but I'll be back. Need to pack up mah miso soup and scrub mah face... wake up the kid, all that.
HOLLA!
Savannah.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well this fic seems to be rolling along mighty fine! I hate to hear you say you've lost interest, and aren't quite sure how to get to where you're headed. I'm curious as hell about Quietus (did I spell it right? dunno), and have to admit that I'm secretly DYING for a showdown between a transformed Jexebel and Vincent!! hahaha I'm dead serious. I LONG, I PINE for it. I don't know if that ever was an intention of yours to pen in the future, but in case it wasn't, I'm so jabbin' my elbow into your side right now.
Come on girl! Get outta the funk! Sling some action our way! If you're unsure of how to go about building certain bridges ask and I'll help the best I can! Let me redeem myself! I've got to know what happens.. you've left entirely too many delicious loose ends not to make me wonder.
I can understand you not continuing if you at a complete deadend and nothing was happening, but this is not the case. We have intrigue, we have love, we have suspense and danger and missions and a tangled, tangled web indeed!
Get a move on girl!
Love,love,
Savannah.
Come on girl! Get outta the funk! Sling some action our way! If you're unsure of how to go about building certain bridges ask and I'll help the best I can! Let me redeem myself! I've got to know what happens.. you've left entirely too many delicious loose ends not to make me wonder.
I can understand you not continuing if you at a complete deadend and nothing was happening, but this is not the case. We have intrigue, we have love, we have suspense and danger and missions and a tangled, tangled web indeed!
Get a move on girl!
Love,love,
Savannah.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story please please don't take this off, i really like it, here's an idea make some challenges challenge writers and artists that whati' planning on doing with my story once i get it up which should be soon, hope to see a review from you
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I just wanted to say I rather like the story. Sad but true, while I played part of the game I never got to finish it, I think you do a rather wonderful job with Vincent's character. The internal monologues seem to fit him rather well- and you do a good job making Tifa be a helpful schemer as well.
I also like the OC- she seems rather fiery, at least on the surface. I notice she isn't very consistent with it though- it seems more like a defense mechanism for her than the core of her personality, although I'm not sure that's not just because she hasn't been developed more yet or that she's not still vulnerable and getting comfortable in her own skin again.
Something plot-wise I'd like to see in the story (in answer to your request for a plot challenge) is the two of them going on a second "date" although the first one was never really officially a date. During the date, it might be interesting/amusing if for some reason rather haphazard and potentially action-filled Turk business forcibly intruded its way into their date in such a way that both Vincent and Jex had to get involved- so to speak, giving her a reason besides a pickpocket to use those knives- which cooooould go a long way towards assuring Vincent that she's a pretty strong woman and not too likely to be put off by his lifestyle and job.
Who knows. She might even impress Tseng and wind up Vincent's partner. If Vincent's brain is still trying to convince his heart he's not in love, his heart should have a field-day with that.
Also- I might be the first and only review, but this story is -very- well-written, and I -really- hope you don't abandon it- it's amazing enough that it's found its way into my bookmarks- AND that I made an account on the site JUST to review your story. :)
I also like the OC- she seems rather fiery, at least on the surface. I notice she isn't very consistent with it though- it seems more like a defense mechanism for her than the core of her personality, although I'm not sure that's not just because she hasn't been developed more yet or that she's not still vulnerable and getting comfortable in her own skin again.
Something plot-wise I'd like to see in the story (in answer to your request for a plot challenge) is the two of them going on a second "date" although the first one was never really officially a date. During the date, it might be interesting/amusing if for some reason rather haphazard and potentially action-filled Turk business forcibly intruded its way into their date in such a way that both Vincent and Jex had to get involved- so to speak, giving her a reason besides a pickpocket to use those knives- which cooooould go a long way towards assuring Vincent that she's a pretty strong woman and not too likely to be put off by his lifestyle and job.
Who knows. She might even impress Tseng and wind up Vincent's partner. If Vincent's brain is still trying to convince his heart he's not in love, his heart should have a field-day with that.
Also- I might be the first and only review, but this story is -very- well-written, and I -really- hope you don't abandon it- it's amazing enough that it's found its way into my bookmarks- AND that I made an account on the site JUST to review your story. :)