rate_review Reviews

That cancer part was pretty funny. XD

I think it was cute. I really do. It gives some inspiration. Hmmm...another story blooming in my head perhaps? LOL I liked the way you showed the other side of Jenova's sons. My only suggestion would be perhaps for you to make distances between the dialogues and the narrator text for it runs into one huge piece of text so one can loose a sentence when going further down on the page. Otherwise, I liked it. :) Hey, how about writing what happens in that shed *mmmm* ;)

Your story makes since to me...come folks if the tall elegant beautful silver-haired and sexy Sephy...came on to you... could you really say no? Personally I think his sex appeal is more dangerous than his sword Masamune!

A sweet story. Sad that Loz only got a footnote-like mention though :(

I'm looking forward to seeing how many more fictions you will produce. XxX

I like it. It made me want to snuggle Kadaj and Yazoo.