rate_review Reviews

love the last 2 chappies this story is great

Seifer and Irvine are such an odd couple, but they work so well here. This fic is really well written and I'm enjoying what you've posted so far. You've got me hooked. ^__^

I love it!! X3 But will there be lemons? I hope so!! Gods, the tension between Seifer and Irvine's driving me crazy!!

I have a really big favor to ask, and I hope you won't mind ^^' My computer's stupid and won't always let me access this site, so it would be really, REALLY nice if you could send future chapters to me via email. Please? PRETTY please, with whipped cream, Irvine, and a cherry on top? :3 I'll be eternally grateful.. but I completely understand if it's too much to ask ^^'

Anyways, I look forward to reading more of your wonderful stories!! :3

~Harlequin

For someone studying Criminology, its pretty abhorrent that you allow your 'inmates' to have belts-- and lighters apparently or else how are they lighting their cigarettes? And that's just the tip of all that is wrong with this story. Characterizations are so far off this might as well be in the Original section. Have either of you even played the game recently? A lot more thought needs to be put into this story, that's obvious.

I really loved this story. As I said before, I've been waiting for this kind of storyline. The characters are just perfect for it. And you have written them,the enviroment, dialogues etc just perfect.
That's why I'm really sad to say that I think this chapter kind of ruined the story.
I didn't like how you suddenly threw yourself into the story. I don't know, I didn't like the characters at all. I think they kind of destroyed the whole serious way of the story and made it to a simple fangirl fic. And neither did I like how you put Seprioth in there. I just generally don't like fanfictions that mixes the different games.

I think you both are very talented writers, and I have enjoyed this and your other stories. So I hope you will go back to that serious and good writing style you have used in the previous chapters.

WOW!!!
JUST... WOW!!!!

... More????

oh man, I can't stop laughing! This is so damn good.
I've been waiting for this kind of story and now, finally, it's here. And it's so~ good. Well written, the characters is just perfect, the story is really intersting and the dialouge funny as hell. It's got everything a good story needs.
Irvine is waaay to cocky for his own good, hehe. And Siefer, all that anger. It's just a priceless combination. And Zell, damn, he's cool. I love his part as a guard. It's just brilliant.
I love this story, it truly made my day.
Thank you guys. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I love this story so far and I love all the characters, though I'm not thrilled about Zell being a whore. it does add to the story a bit though. I hope you update soon.

well,
i thought it was about time i reviewed one of your stories!!
good know ive read em enough!!! XD

this is shaping up to be another hit like lightning (thouroughly enjoyed that one i did) i am loving the story line, and the nicknames given to each character (i actually liked Zelly's so much i called one of my beasts on a game Ink)

i am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next installment!!!! :)

I've always loved your stories, but this one's just got my interest piqued so damn high it's KILLING me.

Please update soon. It's been so long since I was this into a story on here.