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for Shattered Children

by Crya2Evans

person Kuromei
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The brothers will live! XD In custody and under surveillance, yes, but they're alive. X3 Poor Archer, though, getting ganged up on like that. I hope they see that Kadaj is much more mature than he seems to be. In fact, I think he's a little more mature than Reno was at that age. I've read the Reno/Reeve backstory, so I like to think I know what I'm talking about. lol X3

But lol, only Tseng can pin the great General against the wall and kiss all the sense out of him. XD Why is it that I love seeing Sephiroth all flustered? ^//w//^

Moving right along, yay for the interlude that's coming! X3 Cid gets a new airship, and what's this about Nanaki burning potatoes? Sounds like fun. X3 And what kind of secret of Sephiroth's isn't scary? =/ Eeeee~! I wanna seeeee~! XD *hugs Draco-san*
person Kuromei
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Meep! This updated on the 15th, and I missed it! DX And it was such a great one, too. ;__;

I could have sworn Aeris was still in Rocket Town. O_o;; Maybe I need to read through the story again and refresh my memory. lol X3 Still, it's nice that she was there to help Sephiroth. And Zack. =3

And the reunion of Yazoo and Reis... *sigh* I'm so happy for them. -//w//- But the question still remains; what will happen to the brothers? I'm so glad today's an update day, otherwise the wait would kill me. lol X3 *hugs Draco-san*
person Nelleh
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh...

So much peace in the piano-scene. It was very soothing and oh, so beautiful. Yazoo should be a pianist, not a murderer, dammit. I hope he can have a future with Reis, too.

Oh, and Aerith (so sweet!) helping Sephy out? Perfectly gracious! *heart-ache* And, then... Tseng.

I was a little bit afraid he'd started to drink again, but the words he said HURT AS HELL! “Elena wouldn't approve.” (again - perfect!) Of course Elena would mind! *wanna hug him*

:)

Sephiroth is wonderful, dammit! He doesn't even know it... which makes me wanna weep. Gods, I love the way you write him!
person Kuromei
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaa~y! XD Finally, Loz's POV! And... *snigger* Yazoo in an apron and a ponytail. X3 Why can I only see him in pink and frills? lol XD

"Just in case." Yet another set of famous last words. X3 I really hope they can work things out. And Reis is going to visit in the next chapter? Man, I can just see the ass-tearing she could give to both Reeve and Reno. lmao X3 And I still want to see who Sephiroth asks for advice!

Good thing there's an update in two days. ;3 See you then, Draco-san! ^w^ *hugs*
person Nelleh
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I liked the three brothers so _much_. Yazoo was cute, Kadaj was sweet and Loz was totally loving his brothers. Oh, so perfect... I loved it! *sigh* I hope they get a life very much like this in the end - with an older brother watching out for them, of course.

Archer getting kissed like that? Hahha... poor bastard! Talk about getting hooked on a lovely boy. And, the baby coming - shit, Reeve's nerves and Reno... *snort*

Ok. Totally loved this chapter! (and, dear GODS - you are spoiling us! I hope you take time to eat and sleep, too)

*hugs*
person Nelleh
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gods... you made me cry. This was so beautiful... Oh, you are one helluva author. I _adore_ you.

*sad in a good way*

/Graw
person Nelleh
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*HUGS*

I didn't know you'd updated twice since I read the last time... So, now you get two little cheering letters from me. I loved every second of it, dammit. I feel so sad for Barret and Tseng and Zack, man I do. You wrote their grief so well... Oh, you know I love this story of yours. How could I not? It's a wonderful tale, so rich and _alive_... *grin*

Besides, I'm so damn happy that I can re-read everything when I wish too. And, I will.

Four years, eh? Shit, that's a LOT, friend. I hope it hasn't made your Muse flee, though. *HUGS*
person Kuromei
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OwO EEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeEEEEE~! XDDD OMG Surprise update! With news of the fic finishing soon, updates coming sooner AND of an update to take place today! Will it be tonight, or will it already be up by the time I'm done typing this review? 8D Eeeeee~! It doesn't matter, 'cuz I'm so happy! XD

Seph finally makes the first move on Tseng, Barret doesn't kill him and the Archer/Kadaj pair is finally back on track! Of course, there's all the grief and that makes me sad, but I'm sure they'll get through it, somehow. And just who is Sephiroth going to ask for advice? Isn't Aeris in another town? *shrug*

Eeeeek~! I can't wait for the update! XDD You are SO going to see me later! ^o^ *glomps Draco-san*
person Kuromei
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_____O

;___; *sniffle* TT____TT So sad, but so good, too. Cloud was right, though. Sephiroth and his brothers have been through enough. They all have.

Yay! More new chapters and two new interludes. X3 I'm so excited. ^//////^ Sorry my review is so short, but I'm kind of pressed for time and seriously caffine-deprived. XP *hugs Draco-san*
person Kuromei
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"The last time." Yeah, right. That's a good one. lol XD Famous last words, if I ever heard 'em. X3

As for an interlude idea, maybe another peek into Cid and Vincent's vacation. X3 Did they ever dig up that old airship, I wonder? Honestly, though, I have no real good ideas. I'm just excited that SC is going to be a couple chapters longer! *fangirl squeak!* XD

Sorry for the short review, but let me show my appreciation of this chapter with a hug. =3 *hugs Draco-san*