rate_review Reviews

I loved it and just let you mind flow again and pleaaassse plot the five pages of Reno's back...
Xoxo

Oh, a great story! I especially liked the mixture of violence and sex, and the tense athmosphere relaxing during the first chapter... I think there is good potential for the two to explore their 'realtionship' :D

Never thought much about this pairing but I like how you pull it off ^_^ Nice work! Id like to read more.

Also, thank you for the review of my Reno X Rufus story. I really want to write more but im at a block and my muse has run away. Would you be at all interested in helping me with the story ideas?

God you've got this nailed (no pun intended.......... maybe).
I'm loving it. One of my new favorites.

Nice, I liked the way you captured both Yazoo and Renos'
personality. Keep up the good work!

AWESOOOMMMMMEEE. Your story's start was fantastic. Gimme MORRRRE, rowr.
In all seriousness, I'd love to see where this is going, and you've got the obvious talent and capability to make this interesting as hell.
I'll be keeping an eye out for you.
Savannah.

I got a deja vu feeling while reading your story, and went back a few months in the archives here to find out why. Shadowgirl wrote a story called "Appeasing Distractions", and while you have a few differences in yours, where you lengthened the sex scene and made a different ending, it's almost essentially the same story. Even the dialogue is similar. My advice is to go back through your story and make some changesso that the story is uniqe.