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for If I Die Before You Wake

by Helluin

person Cutie_Aoide
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, this was a nice sequel to a great story you wrote earlier. It's also kinda funny how realistic they still are that they might not last to long! Depressing but it fits with their characters. I also like how you added another child to their family. And of course the lemon~! Love how you wrote it out, I hope my marriage is like that too.

Great fic overall! <3
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another one well done. Nice nice to read something that isn't simply 'Hi, let's fuck, thanks' fic. No criticism, just congradulations on good work. Cheers