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for Coup d’oeil

by Birddi

schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love these little one shots! I hope you continue.

If you write it, we will come! Er.. Maybe just Cloud and Seph. But hot damn if we won't enjoy reading it!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!
Oh man! Good times, good times.
Fantastically written. Extremely. I'm serious. I loved this chapter. It was perfect.
person toshima
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is very sweet, heartwarming and funny. You captured all of their characters very well. I especialy liked the line about cloud crying. Please continue.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwh this was too cute if I say so myself. Loved it. Besides I think Rufus deserves it, Karma can really be something.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was.... disturbingly cute.
and yes, I would love to read more!
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more more more - love it; thanks for sharing
person amaterashu
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has ruined my brain, all I can think now is 'Kadaj is so adorable when he sleeps and Cloud too'. Look what you've done, I don't even like Kadaj. Now, gimme more, to compensate the brain damage your fic caused with it's overly cute Kadaj (and Cloud)!