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OMG!, You posted up so many chapters, but i've finally caught up!!!!
I love the whole operations unit thing u got going on, but i hope that hojo and aerith don't get in the way, but instead start whooping as much child-knapping guard ass as the others. And that scene with Sephiroth and Aerith alone, OMG if u do any more, i dont know if my already melted heart can take it (But don't stop)!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!

Yes, let's!

It is rather funny how well they all work together. I like it.

A lot.

And Oh Crap, Aerith and Hojo! Drat those meddlin' kids! I do hope their "coming to the rescue" doesn't royally screw shit up.. although, on the other hand, I do have to admit I love it when things go awry.

You should totally post your next chapter, like, today (looks away guiltily).

Love-Love,
Savannah

AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! YES! Oh, YES!!

That Sephiroth certainly is a busy bee, man oh man.

I imagine that if writing Cloud, Vincent, Sephiroth, and Reno together (alas, if only Zack were alive!) for a gnarly kick-assing scene were half as fun as it was to read - then you're one having one hell of a grand time.

You make the shameless fangirl in me squeal.

Lawd I cannot WAIT to see all the lil freed chitlins!

Keep rockin' me mamasita - I shall never wander from thy wonder! I am a barnacle upon thy smooth, rubbery whale throat.

Parasitically yours,
Savannah

YES Sephiroth! Save the chillins! This is getting so good!

And Aerith, what the hell. I can't believe I actually, genuinely LIKE HER in this story. Hearts and pis on waffles, what's not to love?

And Hojo. Well goddam, he slept in a hotness sandwhich. I know, I know..healing, right? But.. that could have taken a disturbing turn of events.

Loving the story. Please, don't stop.

sephcounttheways, lol, "hotness sandwich". I love that. Hmmm, I guess I could have gone all pervy but ew, Seph and Hojo are father and son, so just...ew!

Yes, save the children! I just had the mental image of all those children running for home in Temple of Doom, lol.

Hearts and pi symbols on waffles seems very much something Aerith might do, at least to me. I see her as organized and playful.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Makes my fingers dance across the keyboard!

Ah, so we meet Havars! What a ballsy little shit! It's going to be awesome seeing him go down. He's gonna cause a shit-ton of more grief, I can tell, and THAT'S going to be fun to witness as well.
Oh, and I can't believe you threw Aerith, Sephiroth, and Hojo into the same bed together for the night. Ha! I kept picturing the image in my head and every time it just.. I mean,
It was just bizarre.
But I loved it! I'm a huge fan of the constant uncomfortable situations your characters end up in. You execute every sticky, difficult scene flawlessly. I swear you could write Sephiroth into a yellow tutu with matching slippers and I'd believe every word - wouldn't even question.
Much Love, Savannah.

OH SHIT! ANOTHER CHAPTER appeared after I posted my review!!
Now that's fucking wicked.

That was Beautiful, Lou..

Thanks, Savannah! You're my own, personal cheering squad. Look for even more development of our three main characters now, and even a little more from support people. We're getting close...

Well, Cloud has just as much reason to hate Hojo as anyone else. Poor Hojo is hated world-wide, lol. Yeah, Seph was just too relaxed beside HIS flower girl to even hear the knocking. Hojo was just attempting to get Sephiroth back in the lab when he left that little cryptic message about puberty on Seph's answering machine. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Savannah! I just put up another two thousand words or so and I hope you enjoy!