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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thaaaat's right, fuck you Cloud! Har har, enjoyed that bit more than was polite.
I totally love how Seph and Hojo's interactions are actually readable and intelligent, vs. 'SHIT, WE SO CRAZY!' 'ZOMG I KNOOOOW!'.
I totally love how Seph and Hojo's interactions are actually readable and intelligent, vs. 'SHIT, WE SO CRAZY!' 'ZOMG I KNOOOOW!'.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sephcounttheways, thank you. I just can't believe Hojo would be so batshit insane he couldn't halfway pretend to be a normal person. After all, he made Sephiroth... who is batshit insane, (cough, cough).
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH SNAP! Hojoooooo! Was it Vincent? AGHRGRH!
CALL 911 SEPH!
CALL 911 SEPH!
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!!!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!
OH I cant't wait till u write the next chapter, this story is progressing so well!
please, keep up the good work!!
OH I cant't wait till u write the next chapter, this story is progressing so well!
please, keep up the good work!!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay. The image of Aerith kicking her own lifeless, frozen body back, without giving a SHIT - was fucking badass.
I loved seeing this chapter. You paint spectacular pictures in every scene you write, but in this latest are just especially captivating.
Sephiroth-summoned lightning bolts ripping apart glaciers? Awesome. Reanimated broad booting her own corpse? Sweet. A Sephirothcicle? Wicked!
Even the small part where Sephiroth took off his coat and let it fall, and Eldon picked it up before watching the general freakin' swan dive into icey waters..
Bad-ASS, Lou - that's what that is.. Poetry in freakin' motion, my friend.
Oh how I cannot wait for more.
-Savannah
I loved seeing this chapter. You paint spectacular pictures in every scene you write, but in this latest are just especially captivating.
Sephiroth-summoned lightning bolts ripping apart glaciers? Awesome. Reanimated broad booting her own corpse? Sweet. A Sephirothcicle? Wicked!
Even the small part where Sephiroth took off his coat and let it fall, and Eldon picked it up before watching the general freakin' swan dive into icey waters..
Bad-ASS, Lou - that's what that is.. Poetry in freakin' motion, my friend.
Oh how I cannot wait for more.
-Savannah
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoah. Total brain stop when her body floated up. That's fucking hardcore.
Still thoroughly enjoying this! You're doing awesome.
Still thoroughly enjoying this! You're doing awesome.
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much, you two, for leaving your thoughts on my last chapter. It really helps my writing urge to hear your feedback. I'll try to fit more romance in the next segment if you want some feel-good goo, lol. Again, thanks!
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And so Miss S. created the Wondersome World, and She called it "Paper Tiger Burning"
And the Savannah looked down upon it's words and it's chapters, and saw that it was good.
And then Miss S. begat Chapter 27, which then begat Chapter 28, and lo, there was Vincent Valentine.
And the Savannah looked down upon the Wondersome World and all that was therein, and saw it not only good, but damn good, and verily the Savannah said unto Thee: "Thou Rocketh".
Amen.
Or something like that.
Savannah
And the Savannah looked down upon it's words and it's chapters, and saw that it was good.
And then Miss S. begat Chapter 27, which then begat Chapter 28, and lo, there was Vincent Valentine.
And the Savannah looked down upon the Wondersome World and all that was therein, and saw it not only good, but damn good, and verily the Savannah said unto Thee: "Thou Rocketh".
Amen.
Or something like that.
Savannah
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh siiiiiiiggghhh
You've melted me.
I, am a soggy philly cheesesteak sub for your words, my dahling.
You've melted me.
I, am a soggy philly cheesesteak sub for your words, my dahling.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You updated! You just made my day!
I love this new chapter, oh, the interaction between aerith and sephiroth is so intense, yet subdued. Gosh, i swooned from this chapter. I hope you'll continue with the good, no, MAGNIFICENT, work you've been doing!
I love this new chapter, oh, the interaction between aerith and sephiroth is so intense, yet subdued. Gosh, i swooned from this chapter. I hope you'll continue with the good, no, MAGNIFICENT, work you've been doing!