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Hey Savannah! Not a problem for you to be MIA, but I missed your feedback and support for sure!
I actually almost edited out Cloud Over For Dinner because I worried it was weak. Sheila Shinra might get more coming to her than this, too!

Aerith: Bitch! Get yo paws outta mah Kool Aid! LOL,that's funny.

I'm sorry you're moving when you don't want to. It sucks. I'll try to keep your spirits up as best I can.

And you just might have guessed right on where I'm going with this. Angst Ahoy!

As always, thansk for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your feedback, truly I do.

Wow.
Just.. Wow. I think I may know where you're going with this, but I'm not going to say a word.
This chapter, I believe, is definitely a favorite.
Savannah.

oh man! sorry I've been MIA. All caught up now and still can't believe how awesome this fic is! Cloud Over For Dinner has got to be one of the biggest highlights of the read haha. And FINALLY - Sheila Shinra gon' get what she had comin'!! YES! Go Aerith! Knock that silly cunt OUT! Save your man!
Aerith: Bitch! Get yo paws outta mah Kool Aid!
That's right.
Can't wait to see what else you've got up your sleeve. I'll try not to disappear anymore. I'm in the process of packing up my entire house/kid/life-in-general from Va to Fl and I'm loathing every fucking second. Keep the story comin' - reading what you write alleviates the pissiness mighty righteously.
Word.
Savannah.

sephcounttheways, thank you!

A good conversation is what I tend to focus on, but I also tend to omit descriptions or action in favor of these conversations.

The romance isn't rushed or pornographic because I think it would take those two some time to be comfortable enough for it. They are mostly opposite forces and are operating with past issues in the way.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. It feeds me!

Well, ya know what? This story is really quite good.

I appreciate the conversations Aerith and Sephiroth have, very intelligent without being overly snobbish. The mark of a writer who understands the meaning behind those big fat words haha. Very nice.

I also like the dash of romance, it isn't rushed or pornographic. Draws the reader in and makes it believeable.

I'll be watching for updates!

Ok, let me just tell you how much i appreciate ur frequent updates! You're like an angel sent from above! Thank you so much, and in case you were lacking in any encouragement, i hope this keeps u up!

My thanks for you both taking the time to encourage me. Yeah, it does help a lot when people review, at least it does for me. Thanks a bunch!

Not your ususal childish Fanfic, adult, mature, satire, humor and with great big words even! Excellent litature. Even the character of Sephiroth is right on the mark [for me] believeable, subtle, intelligent, but still very dangerous. Interesting intellectual paring, story doesn't need sex/slash or hete to support it. Your story even has a plot and everything. You write like a pro... and damn-it I am jealous. Hope the story isn't over yet! I know that I will look for your name and read anything you write! Your writing knocks me out, your fan G

Thank you! Love the feedback very much! No, the story is far from over and I'm still writing.

Thank you both for reading and reviewing! It keeps me inspired to write. I hope not to dissappoint you. Still writing... ;-)