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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No problem! It's what I'm here for: Reads and Reviews. I can't believe this fic hasn't received more reviews - it certainly deserves the attention. I am happy to see that you plow ahead with more chapters regardless, especially considering the fact that this story needs to be OUT so that I can read it!! hahaha
Admittingly, I'm not even much of an Aerith fan (your Sephiroth knows why), but you've managed to give your Aerith a whole lot of great appeal!
Never thought I'd see the day.
I actually... really like her, I dare say.
And you manage your Sephiroth beautifully (he cooks!!!)... creating him so out of character and yet utterly believable.
Talent is at play here.
Great plot, language, gradual build-up and background info all as well, of course. I'm impressed. I'm certain that others have got to be reading this, and are waiting on your next installment just as impatiently as I am.
Enough ego-inflation - however deserved - on with the show!
Admittingly, I'm not even much of an Aerith fan (your Sephiroth knows why), but you've managed to give your Aerith a whole lot of great appeal!
Never thought I'd see the day.
I actually... really like her, I dare say.
And you manage your Sephiroth beautifully (he cooks!!!)... creating him so out of character and yet utterly believable.
Talent is at play here.
Great plot, language, gradual build-up and background info all as well, of course. I'm impressed. I'm certain that others have got to be reading this, and are waiting on your next installment just as impatiently as I am.
Enough ego-inflation - however deserved - on with the show!
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, it does make me feel good to know it's being read! As for Sephiroth being OOC, I had that thought. The good thing about him is we all know what he's done, but with few exceptions we don't know why. He's a person used for nefarious deeds in a plot, but mostly un-fleshed in personality. Mama Jenova done fried his brain...
And really, I just didn't see him eating mess-hall food. I thought about making him the kind of person who ordered out every day, but that didn't fly either.
Glad you like Aerith. She's a difficult person to love, being such a goody-goody, lol. She didn't get much character development either. Cloud is really the only person we ever see the inside of.
But thanks for reading and reviewing! I am still writing. This is going to be a long fic.
And really, I just didn't see him eating mess-hall food. I thought about making him the kind of person who ordered out every day, but that didn't fly either.
Glad you like Aerith. She's a difficult person to love, being such a goody-goody, lol. She didn't get much character development either. Cloud is really the only person we ever see the inside of.
But thanks for reading and reviewing! I am still writing. This is going to be a long fic.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OoOOOo.. Houston we have ATTRACTION! Still lovin' this and still can't wait for more.
On to the next chapter!
On to the next chapter!
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, good ol' Rufus.
Glad to hear this fic will be a long one, I intend to tag along for the entire ride - wherever you may take it.
Keep up the mad skills.
-Savannah
Glad to hear this fic will be a long one, I intend to tag along for the entire ride - wherever you may take it.
Keep up the mad skills.
-Savannah
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! And thank you for taking the time to tell me! Still writing...;-)
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RAWWWRRR!!! I'm likin' this a lot. Good stuff.