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for Paper Tiger Burning

by Savaial

schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(crash lands onto the scene in a flurry of old newspapers and packing tape, reeking of cheap whiskey and Exactas, and quickly dons a pair of badly bent reading glasses)

DID'E BANG'ER?!??!@@@!!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't even get to finish - I'm sharing a computer.

I promise I'll be back tomorrow. I hate not being able to read andreview you. I want to throw things. I'm stillhere I swear.

A whole lotta love,'
Savannah
person Savaial
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, KD! PottyMouth!Sephiroth™ is fun to write.

Thank you, Hunewearl! I had a lot of enjoyment writing that. I can imagine his big…ego…needs stroked quite often. The follow through is coming up in two chapters or so. I appreciate the read and review!

Reader, thanks! Unfortunately I don’t have any way of knowing this is being read unless someone reviews ;-( I don’t look at the count anymore; I think it must be quirky. Plus, I can’t edit or respond to reviews without bumping it up myself. And I know this is a difficult pairing to find in FF7 fics, for obvious reasons… (he killed her!) But I think they could’ve had something under different circumstances, so… Here we are, lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing, truly.

KD, thanks again! I couldn’t write a short story if my life depended on it. I’m in negotiations for my original, but thank you for the offer. As to reviews, I can’t tell you. I did see your work in the originals section, and I left comments. Historical romance must be a bitch to maintain. Love it, though! Thanks for reading!
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chapter just made my day. Oh and the humor!!! So funny, especially the hugeness of sephiroth, omg, i can't even imagine. That threat that sephiroth made at the end though, i can't wait till he follows up on it. Very good job on the lemon! I don't know how many times i did a mental swoon.
person reader
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there! I just wanted to say I´ve been a big fan of your story from the beginning and the reason for me not posting earlier is simple: I´m not a writer myself lol and therefore never bothered to get an account here. But since you once mentioned you don´t believe having many readers I just had to register to post here! And I bet there are many ppl like me out there who simply read without ever registering to review!! But I DID just to tell you you HAVE many readers ^^ And if there was a poll for the best Aeriseph story ever I´d vote for yours:D!!! hehe
Alright enough babbling....keep up the good work!!!! Looking forward to more chapters:)
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read this again and I am amazed that so few review. It's a big, complex story with off the hook UST and wonderful writing. As acting submissions editor for a publishing company I would sign anything original you write unseen after reading this here.

KD
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! That was great! I love the way he talks to her. So hot!

KD
person Savaial
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sephcounttheways quote- "I wanted a fiery, blistering cum-shot from Seph, but I'll take what I can get."
Well, it will get better. I had my reasons for the half lemon. Though I don't think at this point anyone is still reading this long-winded thing to know, except for you and a few others.

As for the massive penis issue, we ARE going from Aerith's point of view and she's never seen one up close and personal. To her any ding-dong could look big, lol. Personally, I think he'd have a big one; he's got big everything else. :-0

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I need it.
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Good lemon. Swell! I wanted a fiery, blistering cum-shot from Seph, but I'll take what I can get.

And is it officially canon now that Sephiroth has a massive ding dong? I mean, seriously. We've perpetuated the rumor enough, it must be true.
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* another heartmelting scene done flawlessly. The one between father and son was good, not too lovey dovey, and the one between sephiroth and a barely concious aerith melted me (again!). I'm glad you didn't get to the sex immediately, but is it going to come soon? You've left me waiting and waiting and now with this, *swoon*. But take your time if you want, it'll make that scene all the more perfect with the anticipation.
I know this might be a bit late into the story to say this, but i want to compliment you on the structure of how you narrate this story through the eyes of Aertih and Sephiroth, it really allows for me to understand situations better and really get to know how they react and all the emotions they're experiencing.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! (but don't overwork yourself, if you need a rest, take it, i'll be patient)