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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:eyes warble:
Simply lovely.
Simply lovely.
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I’ve missed you too Savannah! By now you are…moved? Supposed to be the 30th…
Heh, I’d like to have a Teddy Hojo, aka MY version of a redeemed Hojo. The canon Hojo is a scary, warped thing!
Aerith is about to be awoken by horney Sephiroth, don’t worry. I’m writing the sex scene now. I plan to have it finished by late tomorrow or early the next day. I am not so good at writing smut and must take extra time to make sure it isn’t stupid.
Glad you liked the fight! Fighting is MUCH easier to write than sex, I think. Although, in some cases they ARE the same thing…hmmm…
Lol, Cloud just might want to dick the General at that. Can you imagine the lovely angst-fest?
“But I can’t fuck you, Sephiroth! You killed my mom and burned my home town, killed Aerith and offed Tifa’s dad!”
“That was a long time ago, Cloud. How about if I just fuck you? Would that be better?”
“Argh! No, not really…well…MAYBE. No, I take that back, NO!”
(Sigh) “Just bend over. I promise you won’t be thinking about any dead people while I widen the hole in your ass.”
Hunewearl, thanks for that vote! I start to gag at too much lovey-dovey myself. And yep, I’m happy to tell you the sex is coming up next. Might be a day or two- I have company coming and another job on Thursday. I’m working like a fiend on it right now. Be prepared for humor amongst the horny- I couldn’t envision their first moves toward intimacy without a certain element of funny/fun.
Thanks for your observation on my narrative style! By limiting the POV to two, it’s easier for the writer and the reader both, I believe. I don’t do a lot of third person but I have been known to attempt it.
As always, thanks for reading and reviewing! I’m a feedback whore and I’m not ashamed!
Sephcounttheways, so glad you liked it! But don’t be sad. Good shit coming up, I promise. Thanks for giving me your eye warble, lol.
Heh, I’d like to have a Teddy Hojo, aka MY version of a redeemed Hojo. The canon Hojo is a scary, warped thing!
Aerith is about to be awoken by horney Sephiroth, don’t worry. I’m writing the sex scene now. I plan to have it finished by late tomorrow or early the next day. I am not so good at writing smut and must take extra time to make sure it isn’t stupid.
Glad you liked the fight! Fighting is MUCH easier to write than sex, I think. Although, in some cases they ARE the same thing…hmmm…
Lol, Cloud just might want to dick the General at that. Can you imagine the lovely angst-fest?
“But I can’t fuck you, Sephiroth! You killed my mom and burned my home town, killed Aerith and offed Tifa’s dad!”
“That was a long time ago, Cloud. How about if I just fuck you? Would that be better?”
“Argh! No, not really…well…MAYBE. No, I take that back, NO!”
(Sigh) “Just bend over. I promise you won’t be thinking about any dead people while I widen the hole in your ass.”
Hunewearl, thanks for that vote! I start to gag at too much lovey-dovey myself. And yep, I’m happy to tell you the sex is coming up next. Might be a day or two- I have company coming and another job on Thursday. I’m working like a fiend on it right now. Be prepared for humor amongst the horny- I couldn’t envision their first moves toward intimacy without a certain element of funny/fun.
Thanks for your observation on my narrative style! By limiting the POV to two, it’s easier for the writer and the reader both, I believe. I don’t do a lot of third person but I have been known to attempt it.
As always, thanks for reading and reviewing! I’m a feedback whore and I’m not ashamed!
Sephcounttheways, so glad you liked it! But don’t be sad. Good shit coming up, I promise. Thanks for giving me your eye warble, lol.
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:fans self frantically: Oh my! Go for it boys!!! Hit him, Cloud! Kick him, Sephy!
Eldon: Don't just stand there! Get the camera! Get the feathers! Get the chocolate pudding!
Eldon: Don't just stand there! Get the camera! Get the feathers! Get the chocolate pudding!
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hunewearl, thank you! I opted to not do the sword fight because it was so well-used. Besides, who wouldn't want to see these two kick the shit out of each other? I appreciate the prod, the review, and the reads, believe me.
sephcounttheways, heh, you make me want to write a cut-scene yaoi. I think I could swing it. Got a het scene coming up very soon. Anxious to see how you take it, oh you of the lovely man smut. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it so much!
sephcounttheways, heh, you make me want to write a cut-scene yaoi. I think I could swing it. Got a het scene coming up very soon. Anxious to see how you take it, oh you of the lovely man smut. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it so much!
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet damnation have I missed you. I've had serious and indecent pining issues concerning your sweet ass - I just wanted you to know that.
It's all just too true to ignore.
My god, where to begin? My time here is limited, but christ do I want to pick this Thing apart. I just can't get over the sheer awesomeness of the fic's complexity. I'm loving it more now than ever before.
Shit, I'm going to have to make this short.. spent the majority of my allotted time just getting caught up.
You were right on when you called Hojo a teddy bear. In fact, I'll be needing him for my own (frequent) cuddling purposes.
Aerith? Wake the fuck up - Seph is horny.
Sephiroth? Word, homie.
I was very, very pleased at seeing a REAL fight scene. Sans weapons it was raw and dirty and and and just - exactly right, ya know? Needed. I so badly want to delve into the subject deeper, because it was truly a superior move on your part.. excellent excellent decision. Made all the difference, in my world.
It also ripped a whole lotta "HEEELL YUH!!!"'s outta me. Aint no lie. It's always nice to feel some enthusiasm of that magnitude. I was eatin' it up. I wish I had the time to read it again.
Oh, and ah, Cloud totally wants to dick the General.
Just sayin'.
Love-Love and Yours,
Savannah
It's all just too true to ignore.
My god, where to begin? My time here is limited, but christ do I want to pick this Thing apart. I just can't get over the sheer awesomeness of the fic's complexity. I'm loving it more now than ever before.
Shit, I'm going to have to make this short.. spent the majority of my allotted time just getting caught up.
You were right on when you called Hojo a teddy bear. In fact, I'll be needing him for my own (frequent) cuddling purposes.
Aerith? Wake the fuck up - Seph is horny.
Sephiroth? Word, homie.
I was very, very pleased at seeing a REAL fight scene. Sans weapons it was raw and dirty and and and just - exactly right, ya know? Needed. I so badly want to delve into the subject deeper, because it was truly a superior move on your part.. excellent excellent decision. Made all the difference, in my world.
It also ripped a whole lotta "HEEELL YUH!!!"'s outta me. Aint no lie. It's always nice to feel some enthusiasm of that magnitude. I was eatin' it up. I wish I had the time to read it again.
Oh, and ah, Cloud totally wants to dick the General.
Just sayin'.
Love-Love and Yours,
Savannah
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your story has a great plot, your characters are given depth , your grammar is excellent and the POV is very well done. i love your story! i have taken mine down to fix it up a bit i should be putting it back on soon so i was wondering if you would read my first chapter and give me any advice you can so i can write at least as half have as good as you! please hurry with the next installment!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sephcounttheways, be my guest! Take Hojo as your grandfather. He does awesome tricks for parties, up to and including turning into a...thing...a green thing... Take Vincent too, he's one you can rely on. Just don't put the two men in the same room together.
KristinaDalton, thanks! This genre is difficult because everyone has their own idea about Seph's personality and I'm going to step on toes no matter what. But it is OOC/AU so no one can totally flame my sorry ass.
Emeraldcrow, thank you! I'd be glad to help you if you want me to. My email is blackmasamune at aol dot com. Just send me your stuff and I'll look it over. I'm no expert but I have some tricks.
KristinaDalton, thanks! This genre is difficult because everyone has their own idea about Seph's personality and I'm going to step on toes no matter what. But it is OOC/AU so no one can totally flame my sorry ass.
Emeraldcrow, thank you! I'd be glad to help you if you want me to. My email is blackmasamune at aol dot com. Just send me your stuff and I'll look it over. I'm no expert but I have some tricks.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And by the way, Emeraldcrow, Happy Birthday!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice fight scene, i liked how Cloud and Sephiroth went for a more rougher aproach to a fight than the expected choreographed sword fight. Keep up the good work!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a big complex story in a difficult genre. Great job.