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for Paper Tiger Burning

by Savaial

schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always have to preface my comments about this genre with, "I am ignorant." However, powerful mastery of the craft shines in any genre.

Strong, prolific production of quality work, Sav.

Kudos.
person Savaial
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sephcounttheways, you ain't seen nothing yet with Cloud. Thanks for the read and review!
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vincent is such a badass. B.A. BADASS.

Can Hojo be my grandpa? I love his one-liners.
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cloud is such a BITCH!

.. I'm rather sad to see child Seph go.. byebye :waves:
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOLLERBY ME IN THE TREETOP!

Fuck me, this chapter was funny. And happy day, I check back and an update already! Oh, double the pleasure!

When the FUCK does my child Sephiroth arrive?? Fedex stopped answering my phone calls.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I'm really digging this new side of Sephiroth, there are so many more facets to him now. The teenage "stage" sucumbed me to the giggles. Well, to point out, there was a problem with one of the parenthesis in one of the last 2 chapters (46 or 47), it just gave me a little bump in the story, but it was no biggie really. I hope to see more updates from you soon, it's getting so exciting!!!!
person Savaial
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad you got a laugh out of it, Savannah!
You're taking a train? How romantic! I prefer that to flying but you can't smoke. I would die. The world hates smokers right now.
Yeah, everything is going ok...for now... The extra work is killing me.

"Silver Nightmare Industries" loves to serve you! And thanks for reading!

Dear Sephcounttheways,

Silver Nightmare Industries regrets to inform you that your order has been determined a health risk. Enclosed is your 600,000 gil. We apologize for this inconvenience. If you desire we can replace your order with Pre-Nibelheim Sephiroth.
Again, sorry for this inconvenience.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!


hunewearl, thanks for telling me about the typo. I'll go look at that. I don't have a beta so I miss these things sometimes. Glad you like teenage Sephiroth, heh heh. Writing more now as we speak. Thanks for the R and R!

schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
onos. I hope Seph doesn't flip out. :O
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know this is short - and there is so much I want to say! I'm going to have to save it. Soon, soon, I promise.. I've just got entirely too much crap-tastic shit to do.

Girl, ya know I adore ya.

As far as these last couple chapters go... between my current state of anxiety and the hardcore nail-chewin' you've managed to thrust on top of it, I need a paper bag and a dark corner.

God, but you better not stick Sephiroth outside that door without a close call of some sort.. I may be on the verge of a massive panic attack, but I still want mayhem.

I'm a sick fuck like that.
person Savaial
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sephcounttheways, don't worry. He doesn't. All he needed was foreknowledge. Thanks so much for sticking with this fic. I know it's dragging.

Savannah, hey! Moved yet? Sorry, not going to give you THAT flip-out, but will make up for it, I promise. Got a fight scene and a fuck scene coming close upon one another and I thought I'd "choose my battles". Hope you're doing ok! And you know I love ya.