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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Hahaha! I laughed.. and laughed and laughed. Just what I needed, thank you. I love you for posting that chapter so soon.
I'm actually still packing. My train doesn't leave until the 30th. I've got four days to get the rest of my house in order before the "relocubes" arrive to take my shit away. Being alone, I wouldn't mind your Sephiroth's busybee attitude and supapowers right about now.
Thank you, again (for asking).
I hope everything is going well on your end, I remember you mentioning some extra work being passed your way.. I know how that can be a curse and a blessing - I hope it's moreso the latter.
Oh, and I've GOT to tell you.. That "Silver Nightmare Industries" thang? God that got me howling. Then I got the Angst/Guilt Ridden Cloud part and just fell completely apart.. Came all KINDS of undone.
Keep rockin it mah sweet sistah!
-Savannah
I'm actually still packing. My train doesn't leave until the 30th. I've got four days to get the rest of my house in order before the "relocubes" arrive to take my shit away. Being alone, I wouldn't mind your Sephiroth's busybee attitude and supapowers right about now.
Thank you, again (for asking).
I hope everything is going well on your end, I remember you mentioning some extra work being passed your way.. I know how that can be a curse and a blessing - I hope it's moreso the latter.
Oh, and I've GOT to tell you.. That "Silver Nightmare Industries" thang? God that got me howling. Then I got the Angst/Guilt Ridden Cloud part and just fell completely apart.. Came all KINDS of undone.
Keep rockin it mah sweet sistah!
-Savannah
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, let the heeeaaaaling endure!
I'm glad that Hojo and Sephiroth are able to have this moment. Hojo will finally have his chance to face and comfort Sephiroth the Boy, and perhaps will be able to show him the Hojo Sephiroth the Man has come to know.
Might help close some doors for them both (I hope).
Someone toss the professor some more Tootsie Rolls - he's gonna need all the help he can get.
I was rather fond of Aerith's teensy weensy tantrum in the last chapter... That collective "Oh, CRAP" reaction she got outta the boys had me smirkin'.
Don't go 'round leavin' them Cetra chicks out da loop, yo - them bitches are crazy!
Also, don't think I didn't notice how unusually buddy-buddy Cloud got with Sephiroth during that shower. Oh, I saw it.. yessiree bob.
I think he wants to be friends. Aw.
I also can't help but wonder how the hell the adoption process will go concerning all these newly-rescued chitlins. I mean, all mental and physical anguish aside - how could one possibly fathom what they're getting into when they bring these Experiment Kids home?
"This here is little Josie.. she's five years old, loves animals, and turns into a hydra whenever she's feeling blue."
"Ah, and this handsome young man is Alex. He's undoubtedly psychotic, but you'll never have to feed him - no, dead serious! His entire digestive tract was removed as an infant."
"Don't be shy, Lily, say hi to - LILY! What did I say about pyrokinesis in the house?!"
And so on and so forth.
I'd personally like to think that the brother and sister Sephiroth freed will think of the General fondly in years to come.. The thought of vivid crayon drawings depicting a blood-drenched psychopath wielding a seven-foot sword on the fridge warms my heart.
I can't wait for your next chapter. You've done awesome.
-Savannah
I'm glad that Hojo and Sephiroth are able to have this moment. Hojo will finally have his chance to face and comfort Sephiroth the Boy, and perhaps will be able to show him the Hojo Sephiroth the Man has come to know.
Might help close some doors for them both (I hope).
Someone toss the professor some more Tootsie Rolls - he's gonna need all the help he can get.
I was rather fond of Aerith's teensy weensy tantrum in the last chapter... That collective "Oh, CRAP" reaction she got outta the boys had me smirkin'.
Don't go 'round leavin' them Cetra chicks out da loop, yo - them bitches are crazy!
Also, don't think I didn't notice how unusually buddy-buddy Cloud got with Sephiroth during that shower. Oh, I saw it.. yessiree bob.
I think he wants to be friends. Aw.
I also can't help but wonder how the hell the adoption process will go concerning all these newly-rescued chitlins. I mean, all mental and physical anguish aside - how could one possibly fathom what they're getting into when they bring these Experiment Kids home?
"This here is little Josie.. she's five years old, loves animals, and turns into a hydra whenever she's feeling blue."
"Ah, and this handsome young man is Alex. He's undoubtedly psychotic, but you'll never have to feed him - no, dead serious! His entire digestive tract was removed as an infant."
"Don't be shy, Lily, say hi to - LILY! What did I say about pyrokinesis in the house?!"
And so on and so forth.
I'd personally like to think that the brother and sister Sephiroth freed will think of the General fondly in years to come.. The thought of vivid crayon drawings depicting a blood-drenched psychopath wielding a seven-foot sword on the fridge warms my heart.
I can't wait for your next chapter. You've done awesome.
-Savannah
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Savannah, you crack me up so bad. Oh yeah. What a great review to coat the day! LOL, how about-
"And this fine young girl is Darla, she's a very talented child."
"Hi, Darla."
(Darla's eyes roll into the back of her head as she sprouts two big wings.) "Hellllloooo," she booms in a voice to make Satan proud. Horns erupt from her forehead.
"Now Darla, I told you not to do that anymore. You know how it scares people."
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Seriously though, you'll see the two siblings again. And Cloud is in control of an orphanage, remember?
As always, you make good observations on my fic. Thanks for dropping in the review section, my dear. And how is that move going for you? You should have everything under control by now, that is unless you've been shooting noisy things in your backyard again... ;-)
"And this fine young girl is Darla, she's a very talented child."
"Hi, Darla."
(Darla's eyes roll into the back of her head as she sprouts two big wings.) "Hellllloooo," she booms in a voice to make Satan proud. Horns erupt from her forehead.
"Now Darla, I told you not to do that anymore. You know how it scares people."
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Seriously though, you'll see the two siblings again. And Cloud is in control of an orphanage, remember?
As always, you make good observations on my fic. Thanks for dropping in the review section, my dear. And how is that move going for you? You should have everything under control by now, that is unless you've been shooting noisy things in your backyard again... ;-)
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
little kid mind/big body Sephiroth is about 25 different shades of adorable. I love it, I want one, and I must have one. Do you accept paypal? Money order? Send me one right away.
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear Sephcounttheways,
Congratulations on your good taste and eye for a bargain! The Adult/Child Sephiroth Model 666 Advent Issue is the best buy for your hard-earned gil. Enclosed in our patented Adamantium Box, your new addition to the family comes complete with several exciting features and a few, common-sense warnings.
1. Adult/Child Sephiroth is self-cleaning. Baths are no issue for this model, however, great care should be taken not to introduce to sterile showers. Model may become hard to handle. We strongly urge all owners of this model to instal a whirlpool bath in their home specifically for the unit.
2. Adult/Child Sephiroth is helpful around the house. Unit may be persuaded to perform duties his owner does not care for, as long as the owner uses chocolate bait.
3. Adult/Child Sephiroth does not come equipped with Masamune. If Masamune is desired, another unit must be ordered. Try our Nibelheim unit for Slash-And-Burn Action! Order our Pro-Shinra/Hero Against Wutai model for all your military endeavors!
Silver Nightmare Industries thanks you for your purchase. Should you have any questions of concerns, please feel free to contact us at Silvernightmarenexus@most-wanted.com. Our cutomer service representatives work twenty four hours a day just to serve you.
We also offer Angst/Guilt-Ridden Cloud Strife, Martyr Aerith, and King-Pin Hojo.
Remember, Silver Nightmare Industries is the only company to offer Automated Turks.
Congratulations on your good taste and eye for a bargain! The Adult/Child Sephiroth Model 666 Advent Issue is the best buy for your hard-earned gil. Enclosed in our patented Adamantium Box, your new addition to the family comes complete with several exciting features and a few, common-sense warnings.
1. Adult/Child Sephiroth is self-cleaning. Baths are no issue for this model, however, great care should be taken not to introduce to sterile showers. Model may become hard to handle. We strongly urge all owners of this model to instal a whirlpool bath in their home specifically for the unit.
2. Adult/Child Sephiroth is helpful around the house. Unit may be persuaded to perform duties his owner does not care for, as long as the owner uses chocolate bait.
3. Adult/Child Sephiroth does not come equipped with Masamune. If Masamune is desired, another unit must be ordered. Try our Nibelheim unit for Slash-And-Burn Action! Order our Pro-Shinra/Hero Against Wutai model for all your military endeavors!
Silver Nightmare Industries thanks you for your purchase. Should you have any questions of concerns, please feel free to contact us at Silvernightmarenexus@most-wanted.com. Our cutomer service representatives work twenty four hours a day just to serve you.
We also offer Angst/Guilt-Ridden Cloud Strife, Martyr Aerith, and King-Pin Hojo.
Remember, Silver Nightmare Industries is the only company to offer Automated Turks.
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:dies from laughter:
Box that thing up! Can I get an angst-ridden Cloud, also? Me and Eldon have decided to quit our day jobs and become sweat shop pornography entreprenuers.
Box that thing up! Can I get an angst-ridden Cloud, also? Me and Eldon have decided to quit our day jobs and become sweat shop pornography entreprenuers.
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The stinking reek of memory past, and the foul treatment of the innocent makes poor Sephiroth regress... wow the scene was beautifully written covering all the senses. You're a great writer I wouldn't skip over a single word you type... you make our beautiful Sephiroth a person not just a mad killing beast.
Please don't end the story too soon, I'll be most unhappy.
G aka Calanthee, a fan... or I might need a little piece of Chocolate candy to keep for crying too!
Please don't end the story too soon, I'll be most unhappy.
G aka Calanthee, a fan... or I might need a little piece of Chocolate candy to keep for crying too!
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My heart strings. So plucked.
I just have a little dirt in my eyes. Sand. Wind. Is there a draft in here? It blew in the dirtsanddebris.
:blinkblink:
I just have a little dirt in my eyes. Sand. Wind. Is there a draft in here? It blew in the dirtsanddebris.
:blinkblink:
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was quite a turn of things (the last chap). but looking forward what you make of it. i've been following every chap, every word and i'm looking forward to more chaps. i sure do hope you ain't planning on stopping. i just love how you write it, you leave the reader asking for more. i know i'm like "O.o what! end already! NO!" after every chap. i like how you take your time and don't rush things. it's not like all these other fics where it's "talktalkPOORN" and i seriously like that. to be honest i was really expecting things, between seph and aer, to get really hardcore, hence"talktalkPORN", but when i kept reading it and it just kinda went nice and slow i was really beginning to like the fic and resepect the author and nooooow i love the fic.
okei i got a little carried away here, but in short - make more and don't you dare stop. :D
stz ^^
okei i got a little carried away here, but in short - make more and don't you dare stop. :D
stz ^^
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! What a surprising turn of events! HE was just kicking ass and now he reverted back to childhood!?!?!?!? Dang! That's a very good twist and i can't wait to see what happens next. But if i may say, i was very, very surprised, it just seemed to happen. It might just be me, or maybe it was what you were aiming to do, but there was no buildup to this big cahnge of events or more like i didn't know the cause and the how of the amnesia as clearly as i can see them for your previous twists and turning points.