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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, Calanthee. I really want Sephiroth to have more dimensions, so it was nice to read your review. I decided to regress him in the worst place, too, which was mean of me… I’ll probably slow down a little with my posts because I’m starting to get more work now, but I won’t quit the story. Thanks for reading and telling me what you think; I need that sort of feedback. (I’m shameless for it.) ;-)
Sephcounttheways, sorry to make you cry! He’ll get better! I just want you to know I read Blonde Ambition and I loved it. I’ve never had so much fun reading a fic in my life. It didn’t matter you wrote Cloud and Sephiroth OOC, truly. You made me go with your interpretation so effortlessly.
Thanks for reading and reviewing my fic! It’s nice to come back after posting and find feedback. My little heart says, “Yah!”
stz, lol, TALKTALKPOORN has it’s place but I’m just not that kind of writer. I’ll admit I’m guilty of finding Seph Yaoi and eagerly devouring it, though. I love these liberated days of man sex, heh heh heh. But, to the fic, there will be sex in it and it’s not far from starting. I’m going slower with chapters now that work is coming my way more frequently, but I’m not stopping anytime soon.
Thank you for taking the time to tell me what you think of Paper Tiger Burning. I truly appreciate any and all feedback. It makes me want to work harder on the story, really.
Hunewearl, my job as a writer is to try and keep everyone either shocked or stimulated, else no one will want to read. I’ve read some stuff out there that made me want to fall asleep in my Cheerios. So anyway, the fact that I surprised you is good…for me… I’m sorry if it gigged you in an unpleasant way.
I tried to give clues of his instability and his fast approach to a breakdown, but maybe I was too subtle with it. I’ll go back and look through and see if I can make it clearer. If it confused or surprised you too much it probably did the same to other readers. I appreciate you telling me this prodded you a little too much. Without constructive criticism I can’t improve my writing!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It’s like the chocolate Hojo gave Seph.
Sephcounttheways, sorry to make you cry! He’ll get better! I just want you to know I read Blonde Ambition and I loved it. I’ve never had so much fun reading a fic in my life. It didn’t matter you wrote Cloud and Sephiroth OOC, truly. You made me go with your interpretation so effortlessly.
Thanks for reading and reviewing my fic! It’s nice to come back after posting and find feedback. My little heart says, “Yah!”
stz, lol, TALKTALKPOORN has it’s place but I’m just not that kind of writer. I’ll admit I’m guilty of finding Seph Yaoi and eagerly devouring it, though. I love these liberated days of man sex, heh heh heh. But, to the fic, there will be sex in it and it’s not far from starting. I’m going slower with chapters now that work is coming my way more frequently, but I’m not stopping anytime soon.
Thank you for taking the time to tell me what you think of Paper Tiger Burning. I truly appreciate any and all feedback. It makes me want to work harder on the story, really.
Hunewearl, my job as a writer is to try and keep everyone either shocked or stimulated, else no one will want to read. I’ve read some stuff out there that made me want to fall asleep in my Cheerios. So anyway, the fact that I surprised you is good…for me… I’m sorry if it gigged you in an unpleasant way.
I tried to give clues of his instability and his fast approach to a breakdown, but maybe I was too subtle with it. I’ll go back and look through and see if I can make it clearer. If it confused or surprised you too much it probably did the same to other readers. I appreciate you telling me this prodded you a little too much. Without constructive criticism I can’t improve my writing!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It’s like the chocolate Hojo gave Seph.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seph! Cloud! Don't go crazy! Don't forget about the chillins!
I can't WAIT until Aeris sees the decimation. Seph's gonna have some 'splaining to do!
(BY THE WAY, if this was a yaoi story, this would be the part where they lose thier minds and start makin' man babies on the floor in the lab. Eldon videotapes while giving mild mannered, soft spoken direction : "Lower, sir. Lower. Nice. That's beautiful. Open your eyes, Cloud.", Reno balks but joins in for round two, and Valentine jerks it inside of his cloak. Just to let you know. In case you...need some inspiration for future chapters.. heheh :gets cut it half by Mesamune and then into quarters by Buster: ..Ow.)
I can't WAIT until Aeris sees the decimation. Seph's gonna have some 'splaining to do!
(BY THE WAY, if this was a yaoi story, this would be the part where they lose thier minds and start makin' man babies on the floor in the lab. Eldon videotapes while giving mild mannered, soft spoken direction : "Lower, sir. Lower. Nice. That's beautiful. Open your eyes, Cloud.", Reno balks but joins in for round two, and Valentine jerks it inside of his cloak. Just to let you know. In case you...need some inspiration for future chapters.. heheh :gets cut it half by Mesamune and then into quarters by Buster: ..Ow.)
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^^^^HAHAHAHA!!!! Oh my god!
That's just... awesome.
That's just... awesome.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I think i know why i love your writing so much. It's not just that you possess a higher level of vocabulary, and that there are almost no grammatical errors, I've noticed what you do with simple sentences. Almost every chapter in this story contains pivotal sentences. They're short, simple, concise, yet so powerful. Please keep writing, so i can try to get even deeper into your writing, and the overall development of the story.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Savannah, trust me!
sephcounttheways, lol, Aerith's a great head-butt to Seph. You totally pegged the yaoi angle. I'm not averse to reading Seph with Cloud or Vincent, either. All those pretty men...yummy. Still, your description is a total crack-up. I loved it. Might have to do a cut-scene parody down the road sometime...
hunewearl, that's very flattering and made my morning. Less is more in many situations. Too bad I can't apply that to myself with other things... And I won't quit writing. I love to write. We have just a short way to go before I wrap this story up, but it won't be for awhile yet.
A big thanks to everyone who reads and reviews! I love feedback!
sephcounttheways, lol, Aerith's a great head-butt to Seph. You totally pegged the yaoi angle. I'm not averse to reading Seph with Cloud or Vincent, either. All those pretty men...yummy. Still, your description is a total crack-up. I loved it. Might have to do a cut-scene parody down the road sometime...
hunewearl, that's very flattering and made my morning. Less is more in many situations. Too bad I can't apply that to myself with other things... And I won't quit writing. I love to write. We have just a short way to go before I wrap this story up, but it won't be for awhile yet.
A big thanks to everyone who reads and reviews! I love feedback!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could throw temper tantrums like that. Yay for her not squicking out at the death, gore, etc. Go Aeris.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hunewearl, thank you! It was time for some sugar with that one chappy. Before the end we will have RST instead of UST, so be ready. And don't worry about Hojo and Aerith...;-)
Savannah, heh heh heh. Things will always go awry because I love to torture imaginary people. Some imaginary people just beg for it, too. So glad you're enjoying this, really. It makes me feel good to know you're sitting there, reading and happy.
On with the show!
Savannah, heh heh heh. Things will always go awry because I love to torture imaginary people. Some imaginary people just beg for it, too. So glad you're enjoying this, really. It makes me feel good to know you're sitting there, reading and happy.
On with the show!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cloud : Alright, dudes. Let's go down and save some kids.
Sephiroth and the rest of the world : Shut the fuck up, it wasnt even your idea. :roundhouse kick Chuck Norris style:
Sephiroth and the rest of the world : Shut the fuck up, it wasnt even your idea. :roundhouse kick Chuck Norris style:
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Savannah, your review totally cracked me up. I have as much fun reading what you're going to say as I do writing this fic. Yeah, Seph is indeed a busy guy. He's about to get busier, too. And I do love putting Sephiroth with Avalanche members and Turks, especially the playful Reno. Thanks for reading and reviewing so faithfully, even if you gotta pry yourself off my neck to do it, lol.
sephcounttheways, LOL. I was just talking to someone about Chuck and you bust out with that scenario. But don't blame Cloud for his impetuous nature, he loves kids. He just needed a fire lit under his pale ass. Still, I'll now hillariously and forever imagine a Chuck Norris kick by Sephiroth whenever I go back over this fic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
sephcounttheways, LOL. I was just talking to someone about Chuck and you bust out with that scenario. But don't blame Cloud for his impetuous nature, he loves kids. He just needed a fire lit under his pale ass. Still, I'll now hillariously and forever imagine a Chuck Norris kick by Sephiroth whenever I go back over this fic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!