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for Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos

by LadyVorlana

person flupp
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now this was an unexpected turn of events (with Yazoo being the real master. guess sephi is in for some unpleasant surprise). liked that very much; so please update soon?
person vivarose
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Epic win chapter as always my dear! Love the hidden camera eye carving!
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sheesh sapphiredog! what do you want to tell me?!?! was that a digusted, frustrated, or angered silence???

thebrieness: i'm not going to even talk to such a lowly mortal! silence is my answer to your taunts.

i can't believe seph did that to vincent...

i'm sorry that you laughed your ass off, frizz...i hope it grows back! :)

this has been random!
ASOTA
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(it cut my review short last time, sadly...)

YAY!! SOMEONE AGREES WITH ME!!! <3
ASOTA
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(it did it again...) so i'll finish it here:

...
ASOTA

...that was anti-climactic, wasn't it?
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love you too, frizz!!!!!!!!
ASOTA
person TheBrieness
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oi... with the bloody sharpening of the paperclip again... WHY WON'T THAT THING JUST KEEP AN EDGE TO IT?!?! DOES IT DULL THE SECOND YOU STOP SHARPENING IT??!!

Frizz, dearest, I know you don't pick favorites... But if I didn't give you at least a LITTLE grief, I wouldn't be me and that would be bad because I could wind up being you then you would have to be The Mad Hatter and HE would wind up being Martha Stuart and it would just keep going until THE WORLD EXPLODED!!!! O_O

Er.. or something equally not so great like that. Heh.

Uhhh... anyway... Amazing chapter, despite the fact that I know it's just a filler until your muse gets off his lazy though quiet cute bum and smacks you in the face with inspiration. You still managed to make me giggle at Chaos and his lovely broken speach, therefore it was much worth my time.

Update soon, or I shall send the You Know What's to your house and they shall lurk under your desk and poke you rather rudely on the nose for every minute you don't type out your amazingness! That's right... I'm evil... But you love me for it, so it's okay!
person TheBrieness
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*purrs as she's patted on the head..er, maybe*

O_O;

WHAT!?! I wasn't purring... I HAVE A THROAT CONDITION, OKAY?!?!

*rushes off in an amazingly discrete way to hide in shame*
person AnimeFanGrrl-4-Life
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. Sephiroth is very cruel. Poor Vincent, will you let him rest after this? I agree with ASOTA, Yazoo must be saved. Keep up the most excellent work.

Fan-of-u-4-life
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schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*huge gasp* I didn't review last chapter?! I'm sorry! I thought I had... huh, musta been a different fic. man I don't focus well sometimes. anyway, loved BOTH chapters! poor vinny, those transformations sound unbelievably painful! *shudder* nice trick with the eye thing, I like Chaos' stutter speech when he doesn't have energy. it's... cute. hope I can say that without him killing me. lol, be back for the next chapter! and I saw the watch on deviant art... thanks! I'm still attempting that pic... I started three times but so far I can't get the too hunkies to look right. well, let you know how that goes!