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for Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos

by LadyVorlana

person Ringwen
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I believe you. ^_^ Kind of funny since it was more me that got the OMG-reaction from you when I didn't react on you talking about killing Yazoo, neh? XD

I really like the way you describe Sephiroth, both his cruel/mad side and that tiny tiny sliver of his "old self" that he showed. Impressive! ^_^

Now. ONTO THE SMEX!! YAY!! ;P
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, yeah, sounds too close to frizzle which has got me thinking magic school bus. Not quiet your style is it? lol, loved the chapter!!! as usual!!! not much I can say that I haven't previously said, except... YAY! YAZOO DIDN'T DIE..... this chapter anyway >>. hope to see more soon!
person vivarose
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please don't misinterpret my statement, I just thought it was incredibly funny to suddenly see the caps lock Chaos, even though your note in the beginning of every chapter says thats how you're differentiating his speech, I can just imagine him being the yelling type all the time so it kinda fits^_^ And yes I do love it! I wouldn't have read all 34 chapters in 3 hours if I didn't. :D I do love how you've fleshed out the characters, and how you're working with the Vincent's mental neighbors, its a beautiful piece of psychology in and of itself. I look forward to chapter 37 now :)
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!! ICAN'TCALMDOWN!!!!!!!!!!! NEVEREVEREVEREVEREVER!!!!! ALLTHESUSPENSEJUSTKEEPSBUILDINGUPANDUPANDUPANDUPANDUP ANDINEEEDAWAYTOGETITALLOUT!!!!!!!!!! SOMETIMESIJUSTHAVETOGETUPANDRUNAROUNDSEVERALTIMESTOMAKETHEENERGYGOAWAY........... I'VERUNINTOAWALLBEFORE................ NOTONPURPOSETHOUGH.............

translation:

OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T CALM DOWN!!!!!!!! NEVER EVER EVER EVER EVER!!!!!!!!!!! ALL THE SUSPENSE JUST KEEPS BUILDING UP AND UP AND UP AND UP AND UP AND I NEED TO GET IT ALL OUT!!!!! SOMETIMES I JUST HAVE TO GET IT ALL OUT!!!!!!!!! i've run into a wall before........ not on purpose though........

NOW! ON WITH THE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!:

POOR YAZOO............. why does he have to go through that?!?!?!?!?!?!?! that's just so sad.......... you're going to have to put up with me crying........... i feel like crying right now............ PLEASE UPDATE SOON SO I WILL KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!!!!! best of luck!! and i'm glad i made you and your roomies laugh!!!!!!

ASOTA
person vivarose
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Because Chaos thinks that caps lock is cruise control for "cool". Very nice.
person Ringwen
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm? Scary? Moi? *crazy eyes*
Naah, I was just pretty sure that you wouldn't kill him! XD ....because you wont...will you? *sharpens her nails*
person Kerianya
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sephiroth: *realising that he could have both Vincent AND Yazzie in his bed at the SAME TIME* ThankyougodohTHANKYOUgodOHTHANKYOUGOD!

Keri is intrigued with this plotline...if you must kill Yazzie be my guest, just make it quick. I'll just plaster a big, sex-induced grin on his lips with my own fic, when I get off my rapidly-growing butt to finish the first chapter.

Please continue soon. Good fics are rare to find.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
See dear? SOMEONE gave you a review other then me :D

Love love LOVEEEEEEEE it. And hot damn. Seph gets two hot men. Lucky bastard D:< but unlucky vinny. YAZOOOOO!!! I WAS RIGHT! YOUR PLAN HAS FLAWS YOU EVIL LITTLE BASTARD! <3

....Lemon soon, Ya? Ya? YA?! Plzz :D love you lots if you do! XD ^_~

lu-lu-luv Sapphy
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it seems the other half of me message got cut off D:< *clears throat* AS I WAS SAY! Lemon soon ya? Ya? YA?! I will forever luv you if there is :D

lu-lu-luv Sapphy
person flupp
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!! sephirothxyazoo is SO hart to find and it´s immensely frustrating when it´s your ot-pairing... I know yazoo won´t like it very much in this story but even so, i can´t wait to read the next chapter!!! Please make it as detailed as possible, i´ll create you a shrine.