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for Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos

by LadyVorlana

person blubb
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there. I really like your story, it never gets boring or disgressing. the charaters are very well developed and as far as I can tell, they are very much in character. Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*whimper* but...but..so close dammit...so damn close! your almost there! gah! ALMOST THERE!!!!!! *whimper*
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD so very true darling. don't worry about it, I like this chapter anyway. hmmm... oddly enough I'm beginning to REALLY like Chaos. XD. keep 'em coming! see you soon ;)
person Ringwen
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really do like where this is going! ^.^
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...you...you *sniffles* ...you don't LIKE ME ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! i feel soooooooo unloved!!!!! you didn't even WANT to reply to my last review!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!! YOU LIKE SAPPHIREDOG MORE THAN ME!!!!!!!!!! *fetal position in a corner* ...am i a bad person...? :(

...ASOTA (the invisible one)
person Savaial
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome read. Deep, even profound character development. A tight plot. Sexual tension. Yet you've crafted beauty and hope in this, and caring. Everyone keeps evolving. Wonderful work.
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i resent that sapphiredog!!! i'm at least a head taller than most of my friends thank-you-very-much!!!! and frizz!!!! you CANNOT take yazoo away!!! i was gonna videotape him and reno together once i got him back!!! don't take away my fangirl dreams!!

so... how is sin going to 'exhaust' yazoo next chapter???

CAN'T WAIT!!!

ASOTA
person Emo_Panda
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! You've saved me from my yaoi induced coma!! You're an EVIL genius when it comes to yaoi cliffy's, but the good kind of evil =^_^=
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh la la.

Hot damn. Loved it even if it was short :o

And I wouldn't mind if ya tied me up and handed me to Vincent ;D I would welcome it XD

Vincent: Do you really think I would do THAT to you?
Sapph: Fuck yes you better! don't forget I'm writing you paried up with Cid. I can MAKE thing happen Darth Vampy!
Vincent: O.o I hate that nick name.
Cid: I love it :D
Vincent: shut up Obi Wan Cidnobi
Cid:...no cool Vince...Not cool!

Sapph: Hey! shut up! Im TRYING to review here! -pulls out paperclip-
-Silence-

Anywho. MORE PLZZ. K thanks :D
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you know you love being called short ASOTA. :D don't worry, 5'7 and im still shorter then half meh friends :o the other half are 5'3 to 5'5 :D