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Man, I love this story so much. XD I know I've never reviewed -don't feel bad, I rarely review anything long until the end- but I seriously check this site daily just to see if you've updated it, it's awesome.

Is it bad I'm hoping for Cloud to end up an accidental voyuer do to his stubborness there? XD Seriously, whatever ends up happening? If the rest of this story is any indicator, I'm gonna love it. You're kind of erasing my non-con squick here, damn it.

Here's to a great story, yeah? *Raises glass*

sorry, i didn't get to review last chapter....but it seems a war has broken out while i was away, ...but i still seem to be part of it... :/

well, so vincent absorbed sin! i didn't expect that, and i also didn't expect chaos to try to attack sin, even if it was a misunderstanding. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

ASOTA

Ahhh a slight bit of co-lab that's always loved! You did quite nicely portraying again, the mental setting that occurs when one absorbs a part of a fractured personality. Heh, those speech mannerisms remind me of myself sometimes ^_^

O.O ok... that was a lot of reviews!!! glad to see vincent back on his feet and already pissing of Sephy. lol. I like you're way better of dealing with sin... true first I wanted him dead... er... wanted him to end up dead... but I like this a lot better. anyway, see you soon!

*GASP* dying from lack of total coolness of the Frizz. Need new chapter to continue living... please... post... soon...

Fan-of-u-4-life
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*snicker* hehehehehehehe OHHHHHH Sephy-kun is in a LOOOOOOOOT of trouble now XD *evil laugh* haha poor Cloud XD And poor Vincent, stuck speaking Sinanese XD

And Cocky started it! He even admitted to it!

Kerianya, my god lady XD You make me wanna feel bad for Seph with your threat (ok...not so much as a threat but more like painful actions) on his 'man-veggies'....Almost :D You show him girl!! :D *snicker*

*With the greatest ease, Sin's claws tear two of the robo ponies in half, then decapitates another two. Turning to face yet another pony, which is currently on its back, Mr Cocky casts Illusion on it to appear as Frizzy with multiple mortal wounds. The illusion sputters* "What have you done Sin?" *Mr Cocky then casts illusion on two Knights of the Round, of Vincent and Yazoo. Yazoo says* "A monster that destroys its master should destroy itself."

*In a hazy moment of confusion, Sin turns his claws at his heart. But before his claws can strike, they are blocked by a fish-shaped knife. Mr Cocky pulls out pen and paper, writing a fast note, then casts teleport to bring in a catapult while the black cat, Psycho, administers a beating with the flat of his blades, leaving deep bruises and cracked ribs. With a golf swing, he launches Sin onto the catapult. Mr Cocky pins the note on the back of Sin's head while Sin stares wide-eyed at an unharmed Frizzy. Mr Cocky pulls the lever, launching Sin into the air. Psycho casts dispel, then silence and confusion on Sapphire while Mr Cocky pulls out a computer and quickly calculates where Sin will land and shouts* "Oh Shit! Thats the Electric Haven!" *With a grin, Mr Cocky casts three illusions where Sin will land.* "That will keep the slave busy for a while. When Vincent finds out that he has been changed to appear as Hojo, he will be royally pissed. Oh well, I have pissed him off before, I will survive." *He snickered as he saw Sin crash onto Vincent's head* "Wonder what his reaction to the note will be."

*With the flat of his blade, Psycho golf swings Sapphire's tushie, landing her in the catapult. Mr Cocky turns the catapult but before he pulls the lever, he takes the summoning materia, pokes her in the boob, and blows her a kiss before sending her in the opposite direction of Electric Haven* "Time for more reinforcements." Looking to the real Frizzy, "I don't think Sin was very helpful. Still I have to wait for the next delivery of phoenix downs."

*Ten furry snake-like creatures arrive pushing colorful balls. One by one Mr Cocky opens the balls and retrieves the items. "Your late but your timing is good." *Mr Cocky replenishes his phoenix downs and other assorted goodies.* "Now someone has been left out of this." Confused, nine of the creatures swarm Brieness, circling her body and starting a tickling frenzy. The tenth one flies onto Asota's head, makes a nest and takes a nap. Mr Cocky says* "Oops, hey Asota! at least I didnt toss you around like Sapph did."

Part One-

*Fights against stop, muscle jumping as I reach to grab a Echo Screen to get voice back.* FRIZZY!!! I AM IN NEED OF HEAVIER ARTILLERY! I NEED A BETTER MATERIA!! *Wobbles when a small orbs is tossed to me, missing and getting a knock to the head, once again dispelling Confuse. I grin at the amber orb, eyes glowing once again as I dash forward, flash stepping (it is a move, dare you to say other wise XD ) around the mechanical army. Reappears at Mr. Cocky’s side with my back to the army, hand on hip as I tossed the ball up and down in my palm.* Hmm..My my, what an interesting position…Its always interesting to see what it looks like from the other side of the field, no? *Darts hand out to snatch to Steal your storage of Phoenix downs, and only stealing a few potions (because I’m not a complete bitch regardless of my name C: ). Ducks when a arm swings out to grab the missing items, grinning when you miss.* -Snicker- Its not that easy Meow-Boy. *Pushed a little energy into ‘Materia’ ball* Ohhh Sinnnnn! *Before leaving, cast a fire spell on Mr. Cocky’s ‘Tushie’. Disappears in another flash, dashing around a robo kitty when it tried to attack. On my side (more like small circle now…) of the field, a winged figure is waiting on a knee, dark crimson black eyes glaring as I grinned even more, downing one of the stolen potions and finding a Ether buried in the sachet I stole.* Hey Fur ball!-resists the strong urge to glomp the creature-

Part Two-

”Where is our Master, human? Why were we called here?”
-Snickers- Master is on the sidelines, my friend. Frizzy gave me permission to play with you so I can kick Mr. Cocky’s ass.
*The creature looks confused* “And what of our bracer?”
Frizzy’s got it! Don’t worry! I just didn’t wanna use it against you. So, you gonna help me??? Don’t make me get on my knees and beg.
*Sin looks alarmed*
Don’t worry! Your Master is letting you! Do I have to speak like you make you understand or something? Cause it really fucks with my head…
*The demon stands and cracks his claws together with a slight grin* “As our Master’s fellow slave wishes it, we will obey. If only for our Master.”

*I squeal loudly as I give in and attack the poor creature in a hug* Wheee!! Alright! Now for the fun to begin! AND MR.COCKY YOU CAN’T JUST SIMPLY KILL SIN LIKE YOU DID DIABLOS!! REMEMBER!! SIN IS SPECIAL!! And hopefully Frizzy with make sure this fight stays fair, right???? (pleaseeee! I play nice!) *Pulls pistol back out checking clip and materia. Throws out Bio on the R.Kitties and tells Sin to destroy the Robo ponies, running forwards into all the R.Kitties, shooting at the mechanical eyes. Sin leaps forward, taking flight and diving down in the horses, sadistic grin on deathly pale features as his claws tear into metal*