rate_review Reviews

After having read the Black Jewels Trilogy by Anne Bishop... not sure anything scares me away anymore. lol now that's a twisted but wonderful story... kinda reminds me of this... only with pedophilia. I like the way you figured out Sin's fate... it's nice he's got a chance to be human. Still sticking around!

*flails* why must you leave us in suspense! eets not fair, i wanna see what happens next~! *feels like being impatient today* *toddles off to go tell my friend you updated* i look forward to your next chapter!

Don't ever be sorry for long-windedness! It needed to be done ^^

I LOVE IT! Sorry i haven't commented - I am on vacation right now and should be back home in a few days - but DUDE I KNEW CHAOS WOULD DO THAT! I was thinking of a sword but the gun is better ^^! WHOOT CHAOS WHOOT!

It was so much more beautiful than i could imagine ::sniffles:: thank you chaos...thank you ::wipes eyes and sniffs::

TO THE NEXT CHAPTER >:o!!!!!

:LSDFKJSDFL:SDKJL:FJKSDLKJ What does that mean?! Like Sin is NO MORE! like forever?! ::hides bag of confetti behind her back:: I have nothing! ::shifty eyes::

^^ you made my vacation sweeter [with the revenge and stuffs] now onto saving Yaz! D; I don't think I can take or live from another Vincent/Yazoo ff where Yazoo dies after a while XS!

ily<3 and thank you for updating - now i shall harass for ch 50! MUEHEHEHEHEEHEHH @.9 - ^^!

There's always that one character that is maddening difficult to work with, I feel your pain there. A nice chapter, I do so enjoy how you can portray Sin's mental state, very nice!

NEW CHAPTER YAY!!!
Thank-you muchly for posting. Your chapters are always worth the wait :D
SIN is now human?! Eeeks, super cool! Now he can protect and love his master :P
-wow- you could make a whole fan-fic based off of SapphireDog and Mr Cocky's little war (...that would actually be cool :P)
PS check this site out, I know you'll like it :P
http://www.arigatomina.com/downloads/djs/ff7/index.html

Fan-of-u-4-life
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*hugs authouress*

Kerianya missed Frizzie! And you didn't kill Sin either!!! He's got a second chance in life...in a way. Then he can protect Yazzie, who's gonna need all the love he can get...

Never ever stop writing my dear, or I shall have to hunt you down :P

As for the lack of tortures to sephy's man veggies...I can deal with that! *sneaks off to Sephy with a cheese grater in hand*

Love as always *turns up music to drown out sephy's screams*

Kerianya XxX

*roaring with laughter, MR COCKY casts regen at sapphire which bounces off her reflect and restores full health and fur to robo ponies* "I love it when a mess comes together." *Casts reflect shell and protect which bounce to robo ponies, robo kitties, and marshmallow snake. then casts dispel on sapph again. calming down MR COCKY says* "while technically Asota has reflect, shell and protect on her right now, I would advise you not casting fire at my snake for the sake of Asota's dignity. The snake is an extension of my consciousness and I am a perv. The snake might get creative in hiding. But since I am not done," *Casts mini-toad and confuse, then pulls out and activates Choco/Mog materia. A large shadow is scene over the small sapphire toad as an insanely obese Chocobo falls from the sky toward her.*

oooooooo...... this rocks though it makes me want to both laugh and cry. hope you update soon.

*-Twitches in annoyance- Cast haste and dashes out of the way at the last second, nearly being crushed. Takes a hard hit from being confused and lands on stomach, limbs splayed out. Confuse ends from the knock to the head. With a crocked grunt, rises back to feet…erm…webbed things’, glaring at Mr. Cocky as eyes glowing blue. Disappears in a whoosh and pop, reappearing as normal behind ASOTA, tearing the snake from around her and casting dispel on both. The snake hisses and snaps as a fire spell wraps around the marshmallow fiend, starting to melt the now defenseless thing* you may have a few tricks up your sleeve dear Mr. Cocky. *Palms summoning orbs, picking out a dark red ball* But I have some too. *A smirk covers lip as wind whips around as the sound of bats fills the air, forming sphere above battlefield. Quickly, grabs onto ASOTA and pushes her off the field and off to the side. Diablos ascends from the liquid orb, majestic wings tucked neatly around his body before he snaps them out, raising his hand to gather energy before grasping the liquid sphere, and hurling it towards the robotic army. It smashes into them, creating a dark vortex while it crushes the ground and drains half of the army of their HP, KILLING most of them and weakening the rest. Dispels all spells cast of opposing side. Diablos hovers at side with a grin* -crosses arms with a pissed of look before throwing out a Bio on 2 ponies and knocks them out, leaving 1 and 3 kitties.