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by synthetikmancer

person butabara
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow. I really like this. I never, EVER pictured Vincent that way, never thought that he would think that way. Now I'm questioning MY opinion of him (still adore him, of course) but there is a certain...hesitance, you know? Respect, maybe. You are brilliant. Rock on.
person Alodis
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh ! How My heart breaks when I remember that Vincent is a so lonely being. And often misunderstood. I must admit I was a little confused while reading but introspective texts are often confusing. I liked the poetic quality of the beginning, a bit hypnotic if I may say. Maybe..what could disturb is that there isn't any context, I mean, it's not like it's necessary, but maybe a little note saying, here's Vincent, after X event or quietly sitting outside or I don't know...it could have a greater impact...but it's just me rambling sorry !
Thanks for sharing !