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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I got sucked into this story from the first paragraph, and I hope you decide to continue it, and update soon. I love it. =)
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October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! Thank you for continuing an awesome story. Looking forward to how Angeal reacts to the big reveal :).
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October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I hope your ready for this so please sit down and be ready for my long ass review.
I've been sitting at my computer sense 9 am (Its currently 5pm) just doing nothing but reading your story. Chapter by chapter has me sitting here, eyes glued to the screen and enjoying every single word you've written. As I've been playing Crisis Core, I've noticed how well you stick to the story line, as well as the story line of VII (funny because my husband is playing that game currently) the way you spin the words to match what's going on with what happened in the past is amazing and I find myself very impressed with how well you keep to the story with two games and not just one. Which is almost imposable for most people who write fanfiction. But I think the best part is how well you keep in character with everyone. Not just Cloud, but Angeal and even Zack. When i first saw that you had the whole equip materia in there, I was a bit skeptic on how it was being written. But reading more and more, it fits well with the story and it would almost seem empty without it. I'm dieing to read more and absolutely fell in love with this story. And every chapter that I read after this latest installment, you better believe that I'll be leaving a review about how much I love what you've written. Now, I could bore you about every single part of it that I love (And trust me, there's not enough space for that) so I'll end this review with how well I think you are with spinning words into worlds and hope to see an update soon.
-Kai
I've been sitting at my computer sense 9 am (Its currently 5pm) just doing nothing but reading your story. Chapter by chapter has me sitting here, eyes glued to the screen and enjoying every single word you've written. As I've been playing Crisis Core, I've noticed how well you stick to the story line, as well as the story line of VII (funny because my husband is playing that game currently) the way you spin the words to match what's going on with what happened in the past is amazing and I find myself very impressed with how well you keep to the story with two games and not just one. Which is almost imposable for most people who write fanfiction. But I think the best part is how well you keep in character with everyone. Not just Cloud, but Angeal and even Zack. When i first saw that you had the whole equip materia in there, I was a bit skeptic on how it was being written. But reading more and more, it fits well with the story and it would almost seem empty without it. I'm dieing to read more and absolutely fell in love with this story. And every chapter that I read after this latest installment, you better believe that I'll be leaving a review about how much I love what you've written. Now, I could bore you about every single part of it that I love (And trust me, there's not enough space for that) so I'll end this review with how well I think you are with spinning words into worlds and hope to see an update soon.
-Kai
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October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting interesting. update soon.
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September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled upon this accidentally and I absolutely adore it... I love the concept and plot behind it and I encourage you to keep up the good work and continue... this kept me up alllll night during a stressful time for me and I welcomed the distraction and I thank you for that <3
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omgness I was super excited when I saw that you updated this story! I'm glad that Angeal isn't as aggressive against Cloud in this chapter. I really hope Cloud actually tries to talk to Angeal and trust him over time. I wonder if there will be steamy scenes hmmm? ;) Anyways I'm glad that you're working on this story and I hope to get more soon!
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
alright, alright, i'll bloody review already. love the story and the plot, your characterizations are really good. keep writing and i'll keep reading.
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel sad for cloud having lost everyone- But, I rejoice a little that he is getting to share more time with Zack, I can appreciate the brain on Angeal- Even in the fact he realizes when to back off- This a excellent AU- i am looking forward to the next chapter-
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I just found your story and i really like it. That was a really evil cliff hanger. Hope you update soon.
Thank you for writing,
Graver's Paradise
I just found your story and i really like it. That was a really evil cliff hanger. Hope you update soon.
Thank you for writing,
Graver's Paradise
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know I've reviewed this before, at least once, but I just wanted to review again to say.. I LOVE you for this. I greatly enjoy the interaction between Angeal and Cloud.. it's not something I would think would be easy to write, especially in their current situation. It's so strained, and yet has so many wonderful undercurrents. I love your Zack.. actually, I love all of your portrayals. And I don't care if it takes you another 20 years to finish writing this... I'll still be reading it!