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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Angeal has a seriously suspicious streak! Of course, if the readers didn't know why Cloud acts the way he does, I'm sure we too would find him mysterious and dangerous and threatening, too!
And yeah...Zach, next time give Angeal the heads up! Poor Cloud, he is way not in his happy place right now, is he?
Lovely chapter, looking forward to more! *grin*
And yeah...Zach, next time give Angeal the heads up! Poor Cloud, he is way not in his happy place right now, is he?
Lovely chapter, looking forward to more! *grin*
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October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that was incredibly hot.
But poor Cloud is going crazy.
I can't wait to read more!
But poor Cloud is going crazy.
I can't wait to read more!
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October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahaha, another great chapter.
Your cloud is... so addicting. He is so cute and sad and strong and I just love him. :'D
And the flashbacks with Cloud and Tifa were so heartbreaking. Poor those two. D:
I was so happy when I saw this update. You're truly fantastic--keep it up! :)
Your cloud is... so addicting. He is so cute and sad and strong and I just love him. :'D
And the flashbacks with Cloud and Tifa were so heartbreaking. Poor those two. D:
I was so happy when I saw this update. You're truly fantastic--keep it up! :)
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far. cant wait till the next chapter. :P
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please more, just more:)
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh man, this story is so awesome. It's 1:30 AM and I have to get up at 5, but it was so worth staying up late. This fic is so good, and I'm so hooked. Angeal/Zack/Cloud... THANK YOU for writing it. I love those three so much. XD
Keep up the awesome work! Good luck with the next chapter! :3
Keep up the awesome work! Good luck with the next chapter! :3
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read all eight chapters in one go... and I want to review, but I'm out of words. Seriously. I felt too many emotions through each chapter, that I have no clue what to do now... I'm just speechless. For other words, this story is wonderful and holding my interest. Definatly. Poor tortured Cloud. Even after death, there is no peace for him. I just want to hug him and mess up his spikes.
Your writingstyle is very understandable and great to follow (English not being my native tongue, I sometimes have trouble following stories). Please, please don't ever lose interest in writing this story. I can't wait for all the wondeful things yet to come (That almost sounded like a horrible pun...X3).
Your writingstyle is very understandable and great to follow (English not being my native tongue, I sometimes have trouble following stories). Please, please don't ever lose interest in writing this story. I can't wait for all the wondeful things yet to come (That almost sounded like a horrible pun...X3).
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh. It's awfully warm for Zach to be so...blue *snicker*
Poor Cloud. His life has been awfully hard! I'm so glad that he's gotten at least some pleasure this go-round...even if the Planet is being a (justifiable) slavedriver! I am really hoping that he manages to succeed and gets to enjoy just being human for once in his life. *hugs him*
Lovely chapter :-)
Poor Cloud. His life has been awfully hard! I'm so glad that he's gotten at least some pleasure this go-round...even if the Planet is being a (justifiable) slavedriver! I am really hoping that he manages to succeed and gets to enjoy just being human for once in his life. *hugs him*
Lovely chapter :-)
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October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty damn interesting. I can't wait to see how it plays out. Looking forward to your next update.
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September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your alive, thx for the new chapter cannt wait for the next one.