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Zack sure is a bundle of joy and Cloud needs a friend like him. And Angeal can be scary - I hope he trusts Zack more than he likes rules because Cloud cannot help but seem like he's hiding something! It's interesting you haven't yet introduced Sephiroth other than mentioning him; but Cloud as a grunt has no business rubbing shoulders with the best SOLDIERS Shinra has so it feels more realistic than the time travel stories where they end up being best buds despite their huge difference in rank.
I understand that losing a keycard might not be that alarming, but didn't Cloud snatch up two of those before he even finished with his first day in the laboratory? That might arouse someone's suspicions.

Hi! I just found this story! Ooo, it has a plot! :-) And Angeal and Zack being..."friendly." I like it :-)

I also like this Cloud. I do hope that he accomplishes what the Planet asks of him...and saves Zack and Angeal to boot!

Looking forward to reading more :-)

Well, I just got done reading this from the start, and its really awesome. I mean, I love time travel stories, and I love zack and angeal, so a time travel story focused on zack and angeal and promising slashy goodness in the future just has it all! :)

I hate how aff doesn't have a way to set an alert when a story is updated. Its the main, if not only, problem I have with this site, even if they are a lot less butthurt than ff.net. So, I wanna ask; do you perhaps have an alert list? You know, like a list of people you email when you update your story?
If you have one (or if any author has one) fans on here alway appreciate it. If you do have one, or if not but you decide to start one, please add me- because this story is way too good to forget about because of the time between updates. :(

Anyway, love the story, you're awesome, even if you delay on updates,
With affection,
Rot

Hiya, I love what you're done so far-Cloud and Angeal fics are my faves to read, and I'm happy to find a Zack-cherry on top of my timetravel fic for the day, so thanks for putting in all this effort! ^^ I can't wait to see how you're gonna handle the different plot threads- threesome-fun, time-travelling anti-shinra plots AND a life-stream tainting Darkness?? Woop!
Good luck and hope to read more of your stuff soon!

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You made my day when I saw this had been updated. I'm really enjoying your characterisation, and I love your writing style. Looking forward to seeing where you take the story.

Like the story so far, looking forward to an update X3

Awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter!

I clicked the link to read this on a whim...I'm sooo glad I did. This fic is awesome! Your writing is excellent and a far cry better then alot of the fics I've tried to read lately. XD
*bribes you with cookies* I love it and I want you to write more....please? *puppy dog eyes*

*-* Omg, I CAN'T BLIEVE I MISSED THIS!! I went on a hunt for all time travel fics, and totally didn't even bother trying aff!! OMFG!! YOU ARE ARE /AWESOME/!!! And I've never even seen a Zack/Cloud/Angeal before!! totally can't wait for another update! OMFG! XD Think you can email me when you do? toki.mirage at gmail dot com. I totally understand if you don't want to, but I'd appreciate it. Thanks for the AWESOME fic and that totally HOTT ZACK/CLOUD KISS!! *swoons*

Oh my God I have completly fallen in love with this story. The first chapter was so painfully beautiful that I cried. And oh my I just love Angeal/Zack/Cloud stories, there so hard to find. Go Cloud fight for your guys. Heh hope an update is coming soon.