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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm going to review for each chapter even though you've already published three of them. I abolutely love your fiction so far. it's innovative; a really fresh idea, you know? I'm looking forward to Cloud's reaction when he realizes that, yes, Zack is, indeed, alive.
Kudos so far! I'm off to read chapter two. Oh! And don't take too long update, yeah?
Kudos so far! I'm off to read chapter two. Oh! And don't take too long update, yeah?
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story, it has one of the best plots I have seen yet. The idea is really cool and original. I'm excited to see what happens next, so I hope there will be another chapter soon. Please? ;)
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SO AWESOME. <3
Do continue.
Do continue.
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This looks VERY promising!
And I'm really not a fan of Angeal XD
But I can't wait to read what will happen next <3
And I'm really not a fan of Angeal XD
But I can't wait to read what will happen next <3
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy stories like this but unfortunatly there are not enough around here. i hope you update again soon!
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*tackles* OMG! This story's incredible. I really hope you plan on continuing this since I'm really curious about how you'll continue it.
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! :-)
Sometimes the scene breaks seemed rushed(...or I was simply too tired while reading it), but I like your writing style. If you don't rush the relatonships between characters this promises to become one of the gems of the fandom.
Sometimes the scene breaks seemed rushed(...or I was simply too tired while reading it), but I like your writing style. If you don't rush the relatonships between characters this promises to become one of the gems of the fandom.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it why you're not getting enough reviews for this...good job
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
So, I was caught a little off guard by these three chapters. I have to admit, when I read the summary.. well, I was skeptical. Seemed like the average, ordinary, "let's get Zack and Cloud in bed however we can" type of plot.
I was pleasantly surprised, and proved very wrong. ^_^
Your portrayal of Zack and Cloud's characters seems right on the money, without being.. cliché. What little you've shown us of your Angeal seems to fit, as well. And the plot is intriguing.. I find myself itching to read more. =O
In other words, I LOVE your story so far. I hope that you continue to write and share it with all. ^^
So, I was caught a little off guard by these three chapters. I have to admit, when I read the summary.. well, I was skeptical. Seemed like the average, ordinary, "let's get Zack and Cloud in bed however we can" type of plot.
I was pleasantly surprised, and proved very wrong. ^_^
Your portrayal of Zack and Cloud's characters seems right on the money, without being.. cliché. What little you've shown us of your Angeal seems to fit, as well. And the plot is intriguing.. I find myself itching to read more. =O
In other words, I LOVE your story so far. I hope that you continue to write and share it with all. ^^
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I likes, keep it up!