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Chapter 10.

Hell Yeah!

I laughed, I cried, I REALLY LOVED this story!!!!!! You are a fucking awesome writer. :D
And I love MPREG stories everyone who hates them can suck shit!!
Thank you so very much for this wonderful story.

First off, I hate mpreg. I reject it with my very being. but there are about three reasons why I sat here and read what you have here. One: Your an amazing writter and I just cant get enough of your stories. from the sex to the heart warming scenes, I just love it. Two: 99.5% of fanfictions out there that is Seph/Cloud that has mpreg, Cloud is always the one who is pregnant. Your story is the .5% that has Seph being the one who is carrying babies... ahem, I mean eggs. Third: Imagining Seph having eggs just cracks me up. No one, and I mean no one but you could have thought of something like that. Its origonal and its great! I love your stories (All of them) and so far Blond Ambition and Kittens has stolen my heart. Congragulations, you have ruined me when it comes to FFVII fics. so, as I finish this stupidly long review, I must say that you should write more even if I must find you and go all Sephiroth on your ass ^-^ Loves!

-Kaistern

Wonderful! I'm glad that Seph isn't preggers again. That would be way too many babies at once. You do such an awesome job writing. It's like each chapter is a Christmas present. Merry Christmas btw ^_^

I wasn't sure I would like this story because of the overuse of abuse and torture that quite a few of the stories I have read that put these two as a pair. I have to say I have totally enjoyed this story so far. I am impressed that your version of the miracle of birth did not give me nightmares, a story I read before made me nauseous as I read it but, yours didn't bother me in the least, granted I would never want to have a child that way. It was bad enough when I had my daughter the normal way. Alright enough of my rambling, I just wanted to say how good this story is and I will be waiting patiently for more.

Heh...hot parent sex indeed! LOL...

Sephiroth might have let his power go just the eeenstiest bit to his head, you think? LOL!! Loved it though!

Yayayay! And the babies are so cute :-)

OMG LOL! I absolutely enjoy reading this every friggin' time you update. It was so much fun to see Sephiroth in all of his humor and Cloud's adorableness. It's my all time favorite ad I wouldn't replace this fic with any other. Thank you so much for making my day. :D

That was the most amazing blend of emotions and wonderful well written MPREG I have seen in a long time. Thank you so much for this.

Good thing I wasn't drinking anything in some of the spots, or else I'd have sporfled all over my keyboard. I don't normally go for mpreg...Hell, I don't normally go for any kind of preg, since I'm a dedicated non-breeder...But you're making me like it here! The sex is hotter than hell, and the baby stuff is making me laugh my ass off.

A lot of the baby stuff you're describing is in my top ten reasons for not having kids. People always ask me why I don't spawn...I adore other people's kids, but don't want any of my own, for damned sure!..I just roll my eyes and grin, and clamp my mouth shut to keep from going "Haha, silly fuckers!" at them.

This chapter was good. I like it.