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Next chapter please! Also..I have a suggestion for the Manny list...Zack Fair and Angeal Hewley!

It's Agust 19 and every FFVII fan knows what that means. HAPPY BIRTHDAY CLOUD!!!! Anyway that was an adorible chapter. The best part is I could see all of the cute baby scenes since I became an auntie recently. Babies are too cute. I love how much this chapter made me think of my nephew and at the same time it's so unrealistic. I love it. I do hope that a baby girl is in there future. I'd still love to know what Vinny thinks of the babies. I also can't wait to meet the mannies.

I’m glad you introduced Genesis and Angeal. I hope they can help the two daddy out too. Loved this chapter.

Mannies! I wonder if Sephiroth is really going to be okay with this. Talking about is one thing but standing there and seeing some other man look after your kids and helping your partner is another feeling altogether now.

The party was cool! How DID Cloud manage to pull that off in such short notice, though?

Mm, the sex was delightfully hot, I approve! :-)

OHHHMMMMMUUUUHHHHHGWWWAAAAADDD!!

You just love to kill me with sweetness don't you? Seph makes one of the cutest, hotest daddy I've ever read and Cloud, well he's just f-ing adorable tooooo! I really enjoyed this chapter and loved the babies and how you wrote them. Your maddening skills continue to amazing me dear!
-Lys :D aka-Amanda!

Oh my god... AHha... the dbz annoucer WOULD be perfect. I laughed so hard at that :)....

what a beautiful and well captured chapter, I love sephs attitude towards his children. Hes still him but has a softness also. :)

What a great first month update!! I love the kids. I wish I was able to draw better I'd love to attempt the kids :)

But cloud and seph are so beuatiful in finding their passion again <3

Ok, I reread this, again, and I have just one question. Where are Vincent and Genesis in all this? I'm a little worried that Vinny won't get to see his grandchildren and Genesis won't get to point and laugh. Even if you are keeping it cannon up until the Niblehiem incident, Genesis and Vincent are still around. They're just...indisposed of, what with Vinny in his coffin and Genesis being.... they never really say what happens to him between CC and DoC do they. He just sort of appears at the end of DoC. Oh, wait it just occurred to me that the end of CC hasn’t even happened yet. So Genesis is running around the world reeking havoc with his clones. That still leaves Vinny in his coffin. You’re not going to leave him in there are you? I still adore this story to pieces, but it started bothering me and I had to ask.

Wow Finally! Every time that you update I squeak on my sit! Your science is great, as far the inconsistency of all this, but after all is mpreg! And to say the truth, I love the story and I'm giving a damm for scientific's coherency! Awww...and the kittens, they should be so cute. Perhaps you could just engage more over the subject of their baby girl's abssence. And maaaybe put Sephy again into another " interesting state"! Momy Jenova had said there was a little girl coming up...Yay for fertile Cloud!
Hugs for you dear!

I have fallen in love with this story!!! I am so glad I found your writting, you are definately a new fave author now.
I have enjoyed your writting style and every bit of this version of mpreg. and I normally DO NOT like the mpreg stories they are usualy soooo far fetched, but you have made this believable within the FF universe. and the charcters very lovable and unique. And I deffinately agree with you on the note of sephy just needing some love... and the outcome of such!

thanks for a wonderful story ... and please keep it up! I look forward to reading more.

ps: I was totally devastated about the little girl *sniffs* poor cloud and sephy.

What an amazing update!!! *flails* I never laughed so hard in most of these parts here. LMAO! Especially after that first egg came out, Sephiroth wanted to smash them. HAhahaa....awesome dialogue. I was so sad to read on what happened on the last egg. It was heart-wrenching to see the agony in Seph's eyes. i hope they all heal up and go back home with the lil' ones. Thanks so much for this. it really made my night! :D