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Sea monkeys. Sea monkeys. I wonder if they had their sea monkeys at the same time, years before they were really in synch? That'd be so cute, as well as weird & creepy & sad. Poor monkey... Expired science kits strike me as a really awesome and really dangerous set of toys, depending on what's in them. I can kinda picture him pipetting mixtures of stale mako and acids onto the shotguns and watching them bubble and hiss through the metal. Wonder if he had liquid nitrogen too - when you get clouds of steam rolling over the floor, it's really pretty.

Really love the way you handle Seph's gradual decision to see it through. Zack gives the *best* advice - he should have gotten more cake in return. XD And Cloud really is such a sex magician, taking care of his exhausted lover. I'm not sure how many people could pull things out of drawers with their toes while giving a blowjob... The way Seph loses the mood when he loses his lover's attention to the others - that gives the whole scene that much more verisimilitude, and highlights just how well Cloud does at pleasing *him* when he turns his mind back to it. I get the feeling that once they've got the happy family thing going, Seph will appreciate the gesture in retrospect - the certain knowledge that even then, Cloud wasn't too psyched out to love all of them at once rather than seeing it as a 'my lover or my children' conflict to any degree.

...A/N 3 and the complaint in the reviews about the darkfic side of the genre have given me the bizarre mental image of a pwp oneshot rapefic where fully-clothed dry humping is demanded at gunpoint. (I know, that'd be awful too IRL, but it'd be damn weird to see a fangirl give it the hot one-off sex treatment...)

[... Forgot to sign, sorry.]

I'd forgotten how much I like this fanfic. You are amazing, please keep up the awesome storytelling.

Like I said in my last review have the two that looks like Cloud be girls as you can play around in story with three boys and two girls.

Awwhh, what a relief! Yay, Sephy's going to give birth! I totally agree with you about the depressing parts, and sandwiching them between the sweet stuff - that does make it so much better.
I lold all those times when Seph downed the pastries and doughnuts XD And gay aliens in a ballerina room? That's so Could :D

To sum up the past two chapters - *inhalesdeeply* AHMAHZIN'. ILU, srsly.

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WHOO! He's a smartie that Seph. Keep those mutant babies and their tails! I love the switch around....it is cool. And the MPREG thing....I giggled myself silly....sillier!^^

MPREG? WTF is MPREG?

Just kidding.
This is terrific. I've been religiously checking everyday for the past week to see if you updated.
It made my dreams very sweet.
I found it finally updated by the grace of the Heavens at 5 AM.
Thank you thank you thank you.
=)

Awwwwwwwwwwww, some TLC for my two favourite boys. I'm still snickering over the tattoo-his-balls-thing, though. That was so Jen..... LOL
I enjoy your excursion into the MPreg world even though I normally don't care much for this genre. But hell, Seph in heat sure is delicious ;)
Gismo sends lots of love

....*FLAIL* I loooove you! There are tears in my eyes, bitch! MPREG. SWEET, SWEET MPREG.

This chapter is gold. I cannot wait for the babies to come out.

Just wondering there five eggs so that mean five babies. It will be so cool to have 3 that looks like Sephiroth (Loz, Yazoo and Kadaj) and the other two look like Cloud and all 5 are close.