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for Cell Division

by Savaial

schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOKAY it's totally 6am, and while my recent bout of insomnia is in no way your fault.. THIS STORY DID NOT HELP! haha! Anyways... fucking adorable. Whoah my GOD. Sephiroth had me rolling on the floor, he was so funny the entire time, even when he wasn't supposed to be, just because he's such a clueless cutie pie. So glad they all got back together in the end, had some babies, had some sexin', and thier kids are soo wierd and adorable, and incredibly well spoken. I would expect nothing less of course, lol. The epilogue was the greatest, hinting at bringing Aerith back for Sephiroth, who had a mad crush on her (many many awwwws), and Cloud had a baby! What? Awesome! And Sephiroth was cruising the mall with his little sister and reading with her?! If Sephiroth isn't a pussy magnet alone, with a little girl who looks like him? The female race has NO CHANCE. Anyways, this story was a big, fat pile of amazing! Oh so satisfying! And I feel oh so lucky to have recieved it all in one lump sum! :Devours your epic 70 chapter story in like, three sitting:

Thanks for putting it out there! You're ze best!
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I JUST found this! My eyes popped out of my head at the chapter count! CHRISTMAS CAME EARLY THIS YEAR! I'm up to chapter like.. 27 I believe. Amazing. First of all, I love the way you write Hojo, and it seems to span to all your stories with him, even though they are all a bit different. And the Victoria girl is not only tolerable, she's downright awesome. How you do that, especially with an OC, I'll never know. And as usual you create a world, suck the reader in and all that. Amazing work. I'll drop more reviews as I get caught up! 70 chapters.. you're a beast!
person Ranna
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww...that's so cute! A happy ending. And Sephiroth getting mobbed...*snort* I love it.
person Meepyish
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, happy ending. Congratulations on finishing this wonderful story!
person Savaial
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Savannah! Glad you like the...twisted lemon tree I planted, lol.
Yeah, this is a slightly different Hojo. Wanted to explore a healthier alpha scientist. Heh. Thanks for that vote of confidence. It made my morning. Not many are reviewing, but I'm thankful for every person. You are in a different category, as you were the very first to ever feed me a cookie for my efforts.
I don't do sad endings, so buckle in an get ready for an infuriating Sephiroth. Trust me...heh heh.
You know I like ya, Savannah. I think of you standing in your underwear, shooting birds at 2 in the morning and just grin.
Thanks for the encouragement my dear. I really needed it today. I'll keep ya rockin.

Savannah
person Ranna
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sephiroth just acts like a little kid all the time. At least when Cloud gets all sulky, he doesn't lash out like this.
person Savaial
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ranna, he gets worse. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I agree with you, though,Cloud doesn't behave like an ass when things don't go his way.

Kyouteki, thanks for the R and R! Yep. Babies. I won't go too awfully much into what makes Sephiroth tick because this is mostly a Hojo fic, but I want it to be part of the plotline, too.


schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!
person Ranna
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sephiroth isn't a total bastard. My my.
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heeeeeeeeyaahhhh lemons GAH-LORE! You, my friend, are a master of the art. Boy-howdy you got dirty with this one and god do I love it. Made m'jaw go slack. Hats off to you m'lady. Hats off.

Whenever I read your Hojo I can't help but think back to his character in your other works, and how different yet still-savory you've built him each and every time. You bend him to your purpose without ever losing my faith and admiration, and I find that nothing short of amazing. I love him where and however he dances, just so long it's you holdin' the strings.

Onward.

I have to admit that Sephiroth saddens me. I'm very serious. I mean he just really got in Here and fucked with me. His manner of existence and state of mind is truly frightening, and I find myself entirely too wrapped up in it. Don't get me wrong, I appreciate the unsettledness more than anything, but I still have to wallow in it and share.

'cause I like ya.

But! Very much looking forward to your next installment(s). I am truly loving every shred you've put out thus far, and can't wait to see what else you've got to throw. Keep rockin' me mamasita.

Savannah