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for Cell Division

by Savaial

person Cannibal & Jamie
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY! WE'RE REALLY GLAD YOU CAME! HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY! YOU'RE TOTALLY INSANE!
GO AHEAD 'N' SKIP YOUR MEDS, ON YOUR SPECIAL DAY! HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY! HURRAYHURRAYHURRAY!!!

*bows dramatically, spilling mimosa*

Many sloppy kisses to you m'dear! I send you mad sweet lovin' juju.

Ho ho! And. Let me just say, that I'm comin' back to THIS lemonade stand ASAP. Your Hojo is simply exquisite, and no, I cannot say it enough.

I wanna see 'im bitchslap Rufus. Just once. God I would SQUEAL.

Keep up your methods of simply divine Birthday Girl, and I wish you well.

Savannah.

person Gslinger
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Fucking brilliant" to use your own words. Never would I consider the evil Mad Scientist, Daddy Hojo as the Hero, but you certainly make it work. I can't imagine who the Spikey blonde guy was on the motorcycle was? LOL Anybody else you're going to sneak in there beside Rufus the Dufus? Write faster please I can wait to read more.

Gslinger Cal
person Savaial
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lamica, no worries! This one is finished- I’m just posting the chapters as I do editing. No beta. I love my Hojo too. Heh. Fucking Brilliant. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I love it.
Ranna, nope, not AVALANCHE. I just can’t see a guy as compassionate as Cloud (Advent Children Cloud, not Game-canon Cloud) doing such random damage. No, someone else is to blame. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Savannah, you kill me. Yeah, the applications on magnetized IUD’s are squicky. I made sure to ‘Author’s note’ that thing. And don’t worry about Vicky. Girl’s got game. And, Hojo’s not the unmovable mountain he believes. ;-)

I think it’s fun to give cameos to the rest of them, myself. Nothing like looking out a window to see another character you know.

Michael is also a favorite of mine. His role becomes clearer as time goes on and Vicky gets to observe more. Professor Hojo values him and Michael values Hojo.

Well, strap in for a lemonade ride, dearie! The ride gets better.

So sorry you had to go back to work! That sucks. At least you do have employment, though its bitter comfort, lol. My sincere condolences for having to return to the salt mines, honey.
Love-Love right back!
Savaial

Gslinger, I just couldn’t help myself! (Mad Scientist Perv Ahoy!) Hey, Cloud will be back, briefly. It’s already written and finished, I’m just editing and putting up as I go. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

person Ranna
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sexual tension. It can make people do some crazy things. They may regret it later, but they sure enjoy getting there.
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can soooo get my perv on with him. Put me on the table, Daddy.

KD
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D: I hope you don't leave us hanging on this for another month missy! I love my Hojo! xD And of course I love your brilliant...ahem "fucking" brilliant works of literature ;3 Hope to see more updates soon not just on this, but also you other works in progress as well. :D
person Ranna
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that this particular set of terrorists isn't AVALANCHE. Not that I could see them using electromagnets. They seem to prefer blowing stuff up. "Oh, I'm sorry, was that your mako reactor?" *snorts*
person Cannibal & Jamie
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'Fucking brilliant' indeed! Bravo you little red-hot writin' machine! I LOVE it.

First off, lemme express my feelings for your uterus-shredding IUDs: YARRG.

Moving on. I'm really diggin' on Hojo's sweetness side. What a.. gorgeous, sick bastard. What was the term you used? 'Silken tyrant'? Yes. He is perfect - weakness and all. I do hope Miss Grey doesn't... do anything rash. I wonder if he'd let her destroy him?

And you briefly sported Cloud. I have to wonder what other (if any) familiar characters you plan on throwing in. Everyone seems to like that. We readers think that it's fun, I've noticed.

Michael (Michelle!?) has also become a favorite. I'm interested in his role as Major Source of Comfort to (specifically) Hojo and Victoria. He's just so insanely intimate and wonderful and spunky. I like him. His closeness to Hojo unnerves me a bit.. if I were the Professor I'd be a little more than wary, but, at the same time.. probably unable to help myself. Michael's loveable enough to shoo away all doubts of loyalty..

right? Hmmm. I think I believe so.

Anyhow. Can't wait to see what else you've got in store, so far, things have only gotten better. I truly am enjoying this round.

As for me, I've been great! Thank you for asking. Finally got around to working again yesterday. Alas, my three month long vacation has come to an end. It's good though - I was so ready for it.

Love-Love,
Savannah

person Ranna
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I like this, a lot. And Cloud! I love that you put him in there!
person Savaial
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Ranna. He comes back one more time, for just a bit. Glad you're enjoying!