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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you're probably sick of me saying this... but ... WOOOOOO LOVE IT!!! I love the numbers leading to his name... that was amazing! there's a song I would love to see if you can work in... but I'm not really sure it fits your story... well, you can listen and see 'cause you'd know better than me... it's STAY WITH ME by Danity Kain.... yeah, probably won't fit, but we'll see. lol, see you soon!
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm… Well I’d like to make a somewhat odd request (but you’ve maybe already figured that I AM odd? XP)…
This would be about a pairing I’ve never read about, seme Zack and uke Yazoo. XD
I can vision this as that Zack keeps on “bothering” Yazoo with little jibes and some “innocent” groping. Yazoo gets more and more irritated and then decides to put Zack in his place. Because Zack is so laid back and goofy Yazoo kind of “forgets” that he is one of the best ex SOLDIERs and a disciplined swordsman. Also he is a lot older and far more experienced then Yazoo in most things… So when Yazoo lures him up on the stage to put him in his place he’ll find it hard to do so because Zack really is such a laid back guy that with every sharp thing Yazoo throws in his way it just makes him shrug his shoulders and play along.
In the end Yazoo gets so frustrated that he, in the middle of some intimate dancing with Zack, says something really nasty and evil about Zack and his relationship with Sephiroth.
Suddenly the cheerful ex SOLDIER turns to ice and after the show has ended he literally drags Yazoo along with him backstage. Reno sees this and carefully interferes but Zack makes it clear to him that this has nothing to do with him and that he won’t hurt Yazoo, just show him “what happens to little girls with foul mouths”.
And then he shows him. He kind of dominates Yazoo with utmost ease and shows him that it is not only pain that can make a person whimper and beg for mercy. Although Yazoo is sex on two legs I figured Zack to be more experienced and that he could make Yazoo feel chasten and young. I think it would be more of a shock for Yazoo if someone took him by force using pleasure and kindness instead of pain and evilness.
The part with Zack and Yazoo dancing on stage I thought I could see Yazoo trying to be sexy/evil with Marilyn Manson’s version of “Personal Jesus”. The reason for this is that I did an AMV with Sephiroth and Yazoo using this song, if you can find the time I’d really want for you to check it out. If you watch it I think you can almost see how well this song fits Yazoo.
The address is, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8yva_ya4JpE
So, please tell me what you think. You’re a great fic writer, and I’d love it if you could write this for me.
Cheers / Ai
This would be about a pairing I’ve never read about, seme Zack and uke Yazoo. XD
I can vision this as that Zack keeps on “bothering” Yazoo with little jibes and some “innocent” groping. Yazoo gets more and more irritated and then decides to put Zack in his place. Because Zack is so laid back and goofy Yazoo kind of “forgets” that he is one of the best ex SOLDIERs and a disciplined swordsman. Also he is a lot older and far more experienced then Yazoo in most things… So when Yazoo lures him up on the stage to put him in his place he’ll find it hard to do so because Zack really is such a laid back guy that with every sharp thing Yazoo throws in his way it just makes him shrug his shoulders and play along.
In the end Yazoo gets so frustrated that he, in the middle of some intimate dancing with Zack, says something really nasty and evil about Zack and his relationship with Sephiroth.
Suddenly the cheerful ex SOLDIER turns to ice and after the show has ended he literally drags Yazoo along with him backstage. Reno sees this and carefully interferes but Zack makes it clear to him that this has nothing to do with him and that he won’t hurt Yazoo, just show him “what happens to little girls with foul mouths”.
And then he shows him. He kind of dominates Yazoo with utmost ease and shows him that it is not only pain that can make a person whimper and beg for mercy. Although Yazoo is sex on two legs I figured Zack to be more experienced and that he could make Yazoo feel chasten and young. I think it would be more of a shock for Yazoo if someone took him by force using pleasure and kindness instead of pain and evilness.
The part with Zack and Yazoo dancing on stage I thought I could see Yazoo trying to be sexy/evil with Marilyn Manson’s version of “Personal Jesus”. The reason for this is that I did an AMV with Sephiroth and Yazoo using this song, if you can find the time I’d really want for you to check it out. If you watch it I think you can almost see how well this song fits Yazoo.
The address is, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8yva_ya4JpE
So, please tell me what you think. You’re a great fic writer, and I’d love it if you could write this for me.
Cheers / Ai
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh... *drool*
i can't BELIEVE zak thought MY yazoo was a girl!!!! great show though!! CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER LEMON!!
about the pairings for the new story. i already have a pairing and story so i'll let the other fans go, but if you need any ideas, i'll try to help.
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
i can't BELIEVE zak thought MY yazoo was a girl!!!! great show though!! CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER LEMON!!
about the pairings for the new story. i already have a pairing and story so i'll let the other fans go, but if you need any ideas, i'll try to help.
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry for not reviewing chapter three... i feel as if i lost points with you as your rabid fangirl... *sadness*
ASOTA
ASOTA
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! SAPPHIREDOG!!! YOU ARE CRAZY!!!
ASOTA
ASOTA
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now is that the good kind of crazy or the bad??????
C:<
C:<
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*ahem*
::falls to knees to worship:: OMG&G YOU ARE AMAZING! - THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I've read "Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos" - AMAZING XS...i just haven't gotten around to reviewing all 46 chapters yet ::shifty eyes:: - AND THIS ONE - I'm SOOOOOOOO~~~ happy I found it though >< AMAZING! I'm like OoO!!!! and then ::nosebleeds and faints::
i am your faithful reader....the faithful reader that never reviews until now but ::shifty eyes::
::falls to knees to worship:: OMG&G YOU ARE AMAZING! - THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I've read "Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos" - AMAZING XS...i just haven't gotten around to reviewing all 46 chapters yet ::shifty eyes:: - AND THIS ONE - I'm SOOOOOOOO~~~ happy I found it though >< AMAZING! I'm like OoO!!!! and then ::nosebleeds and faints::
i am your faithful reader....the faithful reader that never reviews until now but ::shifty eyes::
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Before Dinner: feeling yucky, tired and slightly angry at all the unopened post.
After reading new update: WHEEEEEE! Frizzie did an update! WHEEEEEEEEE! It's really good! Yummy, my nectarine was really juicy, however irrelevant that is!
An excellent effort as always. I've decided to abandon my Yazzie and Reno in a club fic now, because I need to write a fic where I can put Kadji, Yazzie and Vincent in kinky corset ballgowns before the image drives me crazy!
Kerianya will write a more intelligent review once she remembers where she put her brain!
Ah well, back to work.
Kerianya
After reading new update: WHEEEEEE! Frizzie did an update! WHEEEEEEEEE! It's really good! Yummy, my nectarine was really juicy, however irrelevant that is!
An excellent effort as always. I've decided to abandon my Yazzie and Reno in a club fic now, because I need to write a fic where I can put Kadji, Yazzie and Vincent in kinky corset ballgowns before the image drives me crazy!
Kerianya will write a more intelligent review once she remembers where she put her brain!
Ah well, back to work.
Kerianya
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah!!!! It was funny I heard Tainted Love on the radio today, none of my three co-workers had any idea why I was smiling or where my mind was, tee hee. I really felt like I was right there tonight, thank you, needed a night out for my birthday, and with those two for entertainment!!!! The song was running through my head all the time too. Do I have to go back to reality?
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Ahem*
Apologies for the last review. I'm not feeling particularly well and it had been a very LONG morning at work. I appear to have gone a little crazy when I saw you'd reviewed. (they're wanting to gag me at work again.)
Well now, intelligent ideas for fan-directed ficcy...
I get down on bended knees and BEG you to use the song "Poison" in one chapter. In an ideal world I'd like the Alice Cooper version, but the dance remix will do. It's the single sexiest song ever written.
As for pairings, I'd like a Rude x Reno x Yazzie threesome! Or maybe Rude and Kadji...if our minds are truly alike I'm sure you have the little remnant down as a raging nymphomaniac! Maybe Yuffie and Loz...
*ignores worried stares from authoress*
I love wierd pairings, and as long as you DO NOT involve Tifa I'll be happy. Tifa-bashing is too much fun.
Before stupid syndrome kicks in again I'll close and go to bed.
Much love,
Kerianya XxX
Apologies for the last review. I'm not feeling particularly well and it had been a very LONG morning at work. I appear to have gone a little crazy when I saw you'd reviewed. (they're wanting to gag me at work again.)
Well now, intelligent ideas for fan-directed ficcy...
I get down on bended knees and BEG you to use the song "Poison" in one chapter. In an ideal world I'd like the Alice Cooper version, but the dance remix will do. It's the single sexiest song ever written.
As for pairings, I'd like a Rude x Reno x Yazzie threesome! Or maybe Rude and Kadji...if our minds are truly alike I'm sure you have the little remnant down as a raging nymphomaniac! Maybe Yuffie and Loz...
*ignores worried stares from authoress*
I love wierd pairings, and as long as you DO NOT involve Tifa I'll be happy. Tifa-bashing is too much fun.
Before stupid syndrome kicks in again I'll close and go to bed.
Much love,
Kerianya XxX