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by LadyVorlana

schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughs evily* oh yes... another story! hehe... so excited to see where it's going!!! always love your stories... Yazoo's fun to mess with. lol, can't wait to see more! later babe!
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, Well, as long as I'm loveable XD

Oh oHoh MY REQUEST!!!!

*Clears throat*
Song: Closer- n.i.n (That song is my drug, I swear)

Setting: VIP(wahahahaha and if there is no VIP or rufus is an ass and doesn't want anyone using it, then a change room is good enough ;))

What I want to happen: I want dear Yazoo to get alittle jealous (only a little!) when he sees reno flirting with someone (don't care who) and takes a quick break to catch his breath. So he heads to the bathroom but as he's going in, He bumps into Vincent whose coming out and catches his eyes. Watching him walk away, yazoo becomes curious about the dark man (who wouldn't). Not wanting to go back to dance floor since he was on break, Yazoo head to the reserved section. But surprise surprise, Mister Valentine is there with a beer, staring at the dance floor quietly.

Yazoo apologizes and goes to leave, Vince stops him and tells him its alright and he can join him if he wishes. Theres a moment of silence before Vincent comments on Yazoo's skills. They have a small talk, one thing leads to another, Song comes on, yazoo gets playful and well....*insert smut, PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!*

After, Yazoo realizes he has to get back to work, and Vince nodds, steals one last kiss before leaving with a smirk and yaz with a blush. Unknown to him, Reno saw the kiss, walks up behind yaz and nibbs on his ear with a chuckle, asking if he had fun. Yaz stumbles over words before Reno just laughs and tells him it alright, that now both of them had screwed a regular ghost, telling him that Vincent comes in once in a while for a break but they hardly ever see. And also, maybe next time both of them could have some fun with the stoic man.

And thats it. Need anymore detailS, you can just ask. Down to the details of the VIP even XD
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg XD I forgot to comment on the chapter XD Sorry love <3

Ok.

IT KICKED BUTT!!! haha omg I loveee Yazzie even more now. Hot damn does he look good in the mind with that skirt and those heels :D Hhe reno got his ass kicked again :D Wheeee!!! Imma glomp Kadaj when he comes out of hiding XD (I scared him away, long story) I'll give you a break from it and attack him for awhile :D Hehehe Puppy Zack gonna get hurt if he does that again.
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It cut off D:

NOOO!! Well poo. It was a good review too.

Yazoo is hot in a skirt XD Reno got his ass kick...again XD And Imma glomp catch if I can catch the little jerk XD hehe
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg.... That last sentence made no sense D:

Imma glomp KADAJ if I can ever CATCH the little jerk XD

There.
person fyrbyrd
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The longer the better is what I say, more Reno/Yazoo goodness is just what I want. And a continued thank you.
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...And I shall call her...

Mini Me!!!!!!!!!!!!

mwahahahahahhahaha
person Kerianya
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee! No worries, for it all worked out for the greater good in the end. It just took me by suprise, tis all.
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha, I was so not expecting another chapter here today ^__^ Thanks... I'm hoping for another epic!!!

Great story as usual from you, am laughing lots at Foxy & Kitten, can't wait to read more XDDDDD
person Kerianya
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My my Frizz, any more and I'll have to class you as the fourth fanfiction author who's work I've developed an unhealthy obssession over, seventh if you count proper authors like Terry Pratchett, Maggie Furey and Conn Iggulden. Oh dear :S

Firstly, most genuine apologies for not reviewing chapter two, but I was too busy cleaning up the blood from the massive nosebleed I suffered from reading it. Twas most delectable. Reno and Yazzie loving...does things to my happy bone.

Secondly, thanks for the reivew for Playing Lions. I will be doing a sequel, once I decide how to organise the plot. It won't be in first person or present tense - that was too hard.

Thirdly, would you kindly refrain from writing as though you can read my tiny mind please? Loz as an excellent cook, Yazoo being referred to as Yazzie and as a sister, Kadaj and Yazzie having a volatile yet flirty relationship? Any more and I shall be scared, especially at you excellent taste in music that you demonstrated in this chapter.

All the same, I am thoroughly enjoying this latest fantastical work, and of course I shall be keeping an eye open in the hopes of a weekend update.

But for now, your talk of weddings has inspired me. *drags Reno and Yazoo away clutching a copy of Elder Scrolls Oblivion: Shivering Isles and a lorry load of wedding-related stuff.*

Love and kisses with extra cookie,

Kerianya