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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THIS is the most beautiful, spectacular masterpiece I have EVER read. Seriously. Please allow me to worship at your altar! XD
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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah found you again! A cute and sweet epilogue!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont seem to have reviewed this story before amazingly enough, since I read it several times..But was it here or somewhere else ? It is simply the best Lozoo smut ever ! I am in need of a very cold shower every time I read it. And your descriptions of the brothers are stunning, breathtaking as usual !
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Rina76,
I was deeply moved by the lovely review you left on my story, although reading this fiction of yours I can only say you wasted your precious words on a novis like me, when in fact you are an amazing writer. Your words are wonderfully zesteful and the conent of the story is rih in flavour and blooming with images that tease the senses like tender seduction. I love the brother of Sephiroth and as you, I simply adore the complexity of Loz. I hope you will find the ontinuation of the Silver Phoenix enetertaining enough to glance through it, for I am most curious about how you will find my portrayal of Loz on his return. He is far more different as compared to before and just as you touch upon the subject of feminity, I have introduced heterosexual aspects to the story as well. This only to make the men more bisexual as it gives the stories more depth. I loved this "Lef Out" story and do belive me I don't often leave reviews as I have had very little time lately. I was hoever, most curious about the way you are writing as I have read some things before, but this I had to read in one go as it was really captivating. It was a very very good story and I hope we will ahve mroe to talk about in the future.
Another awesome character is of course Nero the sable as he is a lonewolf who is cast aside through the curse that is set upon him due to his powers. I identified a bit of him in Loz as you have depicted Loz here (and true to his character I must add). Nero's obsession with his brother but not due to the fact that he cannot love anyone else, but ratehr because he has never felt another person's touch on his body due to the fact that anyone who coems close enough is consumed by his darkness (hence how he accidentally killed his own mother at birth). However, these chapter are far ahead in the story.
I really liked this story and the sex was tender, yet had elements of roughness with the right blend and you described the scences with addition of humour as well as seriousness AND most importantly YOU WERE NOT VULGAR!!!!! I admire writers who can write sex-scenes without having to use crude words. Keep up the good job and congratulations on a fantastic story. You are talented and I am impressed :) Hope to talk to you soon...
PS:PLease excuse any typos as it is late and my eyes are all gluey as the lenses are dry... but I couldn't drop this story.
I was deeply moved by the lovely review you left on my story, although reading this fiction of yours I can only say you wasted your precious words on a novis like me, when in fact you are an amazing writer. Your words are wonderfully zesteful and the conent of the story is rih in flavour and blooming with images that tease the senses like tender seduction. I love the brother of Sephiroth and as you, I simply adore the complexity of Loz. I hope you will find the ontinuation of the Silver Phoenix enetertaining enough to glance through it, for I am most curious about how you will find my portrayal of Loz on his return. He is far more different as compared to before and just as you touch upon the subject of feminity, I have introduced heterosexual aspects to the story as well. This only to make the men more bisexual as it gives the stories more depth. I loved this "Lef Out" story and do belive me I don't often leave reviews as I have had very little time lately. I was hoever, most curious about the way you are writing as I have read some things before, but this I had to read in one go as it was really captivating. It was a very very good story and I hope we will ahve mroe to talk about in the future.
Another awesome character is of course Nero the sable as he is a lonewolf who is cast aside through the curse that is set upon him due to his powers. I identified a bit of him in Loz as you have depicted Loz here (and true to his character I must add). Nero's obsession with his brother but not due to the fact that he cannot love anyone else, but ratehr because he has never felt another person's touch on his body due to the fact that anyone who coems close enough is consumed by his darkness (hence how he accidentally killed his own mother at birth). However, these chapter are far ahead in the story.
I really liked this story and the sex was tender, yet had elements of roughness with the right blend and you described the scences with addition of humour as well as seriousness AND most importantly YOU WERE NOT VULGAR!!!!! I admire writers who can write sex-scenes without having to use crude words. Keep up the good job and congratulations on a fantastic story. You are talented and I am impressed :) Hope to talk to you soon...
PS:PLease excuse any typos as it is late and my eyes are all gluey as the lenses are dry... but I couldn't drop this story.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this series, you have such a wonderful way of writing and such great characterisation! This is by far my fave series on AdultFF and as a shamless loz-fan I just have to love it even more *huggles him, gets electrocuted*
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Well, I'm definitely sad to see this fic come to a close but what other sins can you throw into one bed scene? lol, I'm sure there's a long answer to that, but anyway! I certainly hope to see you continue writing, you have a lovely style! It's been an awesomely fun ride and I'll probably read this a few more times over. ^^
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I love you too *hugs back* Thanks for writing such a wonderful story, it´s clearly one of the best I´ve ever read about the SHM! ^^
I thought that they launched a kamikaze attack on Cloud by letting the materia explode (and because Yazoo said "Let´s get back together")... But of course I can be mistaken. And it still doesn´t make it less tragic... (But since Square Enix never confirmed that they actually died and one doesn´t see them dissolve into tiny green sperms like Kadaj did, I still have hopes. :D)
Heh, your describtion of Yazoo made me wonder what would *have* to happen, to get Yazoo loose his cool. I mean, even when he´s faced with a friggin BOMB all he does is this slight widening of his eyes! I suppose, since he´s been described as someone who isn´t affected by worldly matters the shocking thing shouldn´t come from the outside, but from within himself...
I´m glad you wrote an epilogue -although it´s kind of sad that it´s over now :(- and let Loz reflect on it again. I especially liked the part where he talks in the plural-form, as it also shows on a deeper level that he has come to finally accept that they are a unit and that he is part of it. And I really liked the 'amorality' you still gave them. I think it makes the bond they share even more evident, because they only find peace within themselves and they have to/ want to keep out the rest of the world.
The last sentence startled me though. It´s double negative and therefore it would mean that Loz IS still alone... But then I guess you can use it as a stilistic device too, can´t you? (Since I´m not a native speaker I would think that you used some kind of 'slang' or so? It confuses me a little).
So, it was a wonderful reading and I´m really looking forward to your next stories!!!
Take care!
I thought that they launched a kamikaze attack on Cloud by letting the materia explode (and because Yazoo said "Let´s get back together")... But of course I can be mistaken. And it still doesn´t make it less tragic... (But since Square Enix never confirmed that they actually died and one doesn´t see them dissolve into tiny green sperms like Kadaj did, I still have hopes. :D)
Heh, your describtion of Yazoo made me wonder what would *have* to happen, to get Yazoo loose his cool. I mean, even when he´s faced with a friggin BOMB all he does is this slight widening of his eyes! I suppose, since he´s been described as someone who isn´t affected by worldly matters the shocking thing shouldn´t come from the outside, but from within himself...
I´m glad you wrote an epilogue -although it´s kind of sad that it´s over now :(- and let Loz reflect on it again. I especially liked the part where he talks in the plural-form, as it also shows on a deeper level that he has come to finally accept that they are a unit and that he is part of it. And I really liked the 'amorality' you still gave them. I think it makes the bond they share even more evident, because they only find peace within themselves and they have to/ want to keep out the rest of the world.
The last sentence startled me though. It´s double negative and therefore it would mean that Loz IS still alone... But then I guess you can use it as a stilistic device too, can´t you? (Since I´m not a native speaker I would think that you used some kind of 'slang' or so? It confuses me a little).
So, it was a wonderful reading and I´m really looking forward to your next stories!!!
Take care!
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful ending! The entire thing, just spectacularly written. And so nice to see it from Loz's point of view. A extraordinary piece!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the ending made me smile!!
overall, it was a wonderfull story, and i really appriciate the emotion of everything and how its written. I suck at reviews so heres a cookie. -gives cookie-
overall, it was a wonderfull story, and i really appriciate the emotion of everything and how its written. I suck at reviews so heres a cookie. -gives cookie-
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December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *Jumps with joy* I loved reading this part! I was like wow at the end, and also I was saying "About effing time!" WOOT! Well, this certainly was one of the best fics I've ever read! I'm shocked at how they ended up building power like that. Now we know that you might have to take cover if you wanna watch them go at it. I give your fic ten stars! ^____________^