rate_review Reviews

AAARGH. THIS FIC IS DRIVING ME INSANE. WHY DIDN'T YOU MAKE IT INTO A FULL PWP?! As a writer I see where you were going here, and I can appreciate that, BUT DAMMIT. I just thought the storyline had some merit to it. Good job, imo. I'm gonna go lurk your profile to see if you have any full-length ones.

Nice...

But it ends up feeling gratuitous and unnecessary. Just an offer or plea of sex from Ashe would have done.

Well, I'll be damned..a story in AFF that doesn't have the guy and girl having insane amounts of sex? You, sir, are an oddity around here. You actually think of how the characters would react, and let them keep their morals. Hell, I could easily see this happen!

I would say 'thank you for restoring hope to the fanfiction world', but I can easily see the joking counter: Don't Mention It.

Keep the writing up, comrade.