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by LadyVorlana

person Chephren
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okies, please forgive me if this went through the first time! Haha!!! XDDDDD I just had to tell you how much I loved this first chappy of Electric Haven! I read it ages ago and didn't comment because I was a lurker but it doesn't change the fact that this is one of my favorite Vinzoo ficcies ever!!!! You have changed Vinzoo and that song Closer forever!! I didn't even really like the song before but I guess it just hadn't been presented to me in the right way!! THIS was most certainly the right way! You can totally hear both of them in the elements of the song too! Vincent and his fanged smirk playing with Yazzy the sex kitten! *melts...puddle!* Fantastic work!!! I had to come back and tell you!!
person Kaiten
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mmm... I got a good idea, me thinks!

Pairing: Cid/Vincent
Song: Nickleback - something in your mouth {maybe... i dont really care}

Situation: Vincent goes home and tells Cid of his time at the Club. Cid gets a bit jealous and teasingly asks for a private dance since vinny got one. Vincent actually agrees, and dances while Cid is bound to... iunno... a chair or something...
Then the smut (with some bondage, and Vincent bottoming but Cid bound) hmm... maybe with some piercings on Cid... Nipple rings or something on Vin maybe... Ill leave the smut to you, since i suck at it...
After they come, Cid has the brilliant idea to open a chain of the strip club...

(OR- if you want the club to have a more active part...)
Cid comes to visit Vince and THEN you can continue from sentence 2. and Cid's idea is the strip club in their home town of... whatever it is..

if you wanna do this, go right ahead... if not, then i understand too!
<3~ Kai
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW words escape me at the moment for how well you put all of this together! I loved it. When I first heard the pairing i was like- no way- but this is awesome! I will have to think of a pairing and plot bunny for you ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here we go!

Pairing Idea: Reno X Rufus (my all time fave FFVII pairing *fan girl squeal)
Basic idea: you know what they say, all work and no play makes a president a horny boy- and Rufus has been working way too hard! Rufus has seen the games Reno plays and is tired of missing out on the action. Theme I leave open to you just no bondage or rape. And maybe we can finally answer the question of just who is seme and who is uke in that relationship? LOL
Song: Addicted by Saving Abel
^_^ thanks! Cant wait to see what you come up with next!
person vivarose
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahha! You my darling are a genius! I'd been trying to find a way to appropriately write song fics that incorporate the actions of the characters with those of the lyrics! Absolutely genius! You are now my reference for LIFE!
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D I love the Idea, and the first Chapter~
Hmmnn... Mind if I pop in a request?
Well...

My current addiction is Valenwind.
So maybe, just maybe you could write one with that paring?

Well, here's the Idea:

We have Sir-Spooks-Alot 'n Captian Highwind enjoying a nice, semi-quiet drink together and they're having a "civil" conversation. Meaning, Cid's pestering our loveable gunman about something. That something being his sex life.

As we know, Yazzie 'n Vince had some fun last chapter, and Vince'll be all, "Yeah, whatever, shut up and enjoy your drink" (Well, I'm guessing he'll be like that...). Cid will pester him for a few more minutes and then concentrate on his drink.

Well, the both men enjoy their alcoholic beverages and each of them get a pleasent buzz. The topic suddenly shifts to Cid's, yes CID'S, life in bed. Well our poor little blondie hasn't had anything for a while, so he flat out says "Vince, I haven't had any for such a long time, the damn tables look fuckable." and remember, they're buzzed/drunk/whatever you want. So let's say Vinny is a flirty drunk 'kay?

Well, a random song comes on (It has to be sexiful, it HAS to be. Feel free to choose one though, Sapphire already used my first option and I can’t seem to think of one) and Reno 'n Yazzie do their thing 'n... yeah. Songs over and poor little deprived Cid looks like he wants to eat our dancers alive. Vincent gets the sudden idea to rub the captain’s back and tell him that’ll be all right; a flirty/seductive/sexy/HOMAIGODTHAT’SHAWT tone to his voice.

In short, our gunman gets dragged to the nearest change room ( or whatever, I’m not picky ;D) by Cid and pinned up against the wall. Vincent seems surprised (D< its like he was expecting it... that silly, silly man) and asks Cid what he was doing. Captain Highwind shrugs and attacks Vincent’s throat with kiss ‘n small bites. Cid pauses ‘n tells Vincent that he was right, it was going to be all right, and both of them would be leaving the room very satisfied men. –insert smut, any type of kink that you think either of the two men should have here, please?-

In the end, Ciddy was right, they had their fun, and both of them were very satisfied. As they leave, they notice Reno walking down the hall, an amused look on his face. He nods to Vincent and calls Cid over. He tells them that the next time they borrow a room; they should try to be a little quieter ‘cause him, Yazzie ‘n Zack heard the WHOLE thing.

... It might be cheesy, but I don’t care. I’ve read Sapphire’s VCR complex so many times I could probably recite it to people. I need more or my current drug... D<

As long as it comes in some sort of shape or form, I will be happy.
:3

Have fun? I hope this feeds your museee~
:D


person vivarose
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fucking awesome! I LOVE this pairing so much! LOVE LOVE LOVE!
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Vincent/Yazoo I love it!! You're are a creative writer .....Could you write one about a drunk Yuffie and Cid bothering and annoying the hell out Vincent..... Pretty Please with chocolate fudge and whipped cream on top
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hum, I really enjoyed this pairing, and it was done very well. Great job, and keep going.
person sano
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Request!

Sephiroth/Vincent

Arch Rival relationship. Always competing and challenging each other.

Sephiroth is from another well-known club that is similar to Electric Haven.
A challenge from Sephiroth. Or maybe a proposal from Rufus for Vincent to make Sephiroth happy. (To clinch a business deal or collaboration)

SMUT ENSUES!

You can throw in bondage or anything you want XDD It's all up to you how the whole thing goes.

Really hope to see this!!