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for Electric Haven

by LadyVorlana

person Ainaloth
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good one!! Really good, I hope you choose to do my request too! XD

Love/ Ai
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've got a grin on my face for this one. Kept up the fantastic work, I love it!
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
maybe I'm just boring, but Reno/Yaz seems to be the gold medal of the FFVII pairing universe. (weeeellll... throw a punk-rock Cloud in that mix, and I just might die from orgasms)


It doesn't get any better that.


If I had to make a request, it would be Yazoo making a bet with our redhead that he can't keep his paws off of his beautiful silver ass for any length of time. Of course Reno accepts and blah blah blah seduction, la la la naughtiness, and eventually Yazoo wins, and Reno has to beg him, PLEAD with him, (on his knees and preferably shirtless) for some sweet, sweet lovins. So yeah. Just a thought.

/love
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW......O_o Uh....majorly HOT & BOTHERED here!!!


just one request:


FINISH THIS ONE!!! please??!!!?!?!



love you forever!



laters! ~_^
person Etrixan
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a couple ideas:

1. Rufus' dad wouldn't help him finance club so Reeve stepped in. Rufus has been thanking him ever since. Even though (especially because) Reeve thinks it's not right (he's so much older, he's the mentor, blah blah blah). Rufus loves that fact that Reeve can't resist him for long. Music: I'm thinking something a little more techno, maybe Pink & Redman's 'Get the Party Started' or something.

2. Cloud has always kept Tifa away with 'just friends', so when he has a late delivery to the club she decides to get a little revenge. She pulls him onto the dance floor & rubs herself all over him. When the song's over he's all hot & hard and she's saying "thanks, friend" and leaving. Cloud needs relief. Who's going to give it to him? I'll leave that to you but maybe it could be 2 who-s... No music suggestion, sorry.
person Kerianya
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the delay in review, sweetheart. It's been a distressing few days for me and I wasn't fit to write any reviews.

Anyway, that has to be the most delicious Vincent and Yazzie smut of all time! Certainly got me all hot and bothered. Looking forward to the next chapter *sings* 'cos I got a preview!

*returns to slight bad mood, and kicks Reno*
You've got prime steak at home *points at Yazzie* and you pick up a kebab? *points at Zack* Idiot!

Right, now I've got my *ohmygodthatidiotcheatedonyazzie* complex out of my system, I'll leave you to it.

Love as always,

Kerianya XxX
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can not get enough of your writing style!!!!! You make me ..... >.> ..... picture great things O.O Thank you for writing it and I hope next time I review I can have an idea for you. Right now .... my mind is occupied.
person hitsuni
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU!
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... So I can just ask here then? ö.ö
Well, I'm a huge Yazoo fan, an even bigger Renzoo fan, but... Since you've already done Reno and Yazoo, I'd like to see some RufusXYazoo... Or as I like to call it: Rufazoo. ^^ And as for a theme, my personal favourite is: RAPE and MILD BONDAGE. *thumbs up*
I've yet to see this happen, but if it did...*lustful eyes*
I really hope you can work with that! ^w^
person Brea XStrify
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
[for "Vincent/Yazoo - Closer"]
::gasps:: OoO!!! that was/is AMAZING >< I can't breathe! OMG&G I WANNA KNOW WHY VINCENT LOOKS SO AMAZING >< AND HAS TWO DIFFERNENTLY COLOURED EYES.

Well I'm not one for giving others inspiration. I enjoy reading and reviewing more than thinking up stuffs - but for you, I shall try and be pervertedly creative and give you something nice. Maybe not now, but soon!

~until then<3