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Poo.... was looking forward, via route of a thought out plot and character-building, to see how you would bring Seifer and Squall closer together.... and then your last note. :( I mean, it's your story, and so far well written and interesting. The idea is really kewl! But I can't really read any other pairings from this fandom, so it makes me double sad to have found a new story only to have unexpected casting changes. *sad* I hope you continue it though, wherever it may lead --- but if you'd be so kind as to change the summary/pairing category. I feel a teensy bit like a fly lured into a juicy web of no SxS. Best regards,

Up to Chap.9.

Viva'le PLOT!! XD Lol. Mmmm... like a slow cooked roast... sooooooooooooo much more tender an juicy than anything you could whip up in a microwave..
that's a silly analogy.. but I stand by it.
"LET THE JUICES COME TO A SLOW BOIL~" Lol. **reading on..**

13. Explanation

@_________@ No SeiferxSquall????????? **wobbly bottom lip**

*sigh*
*si~~~~~~~~~gh* Poop. So hard to find new SxS stories, well written, plot driven, when you've (me) read almost everything out there already. waaaaaaah.. poooooooop.. I was so excited for this! But I totally understand when Plot takes a swing to the left when u were expecting a right. *hugs*
Best of luck! Can't continue though... Irvine.. dun'like 'im with mah Squall, and Zell.. O_o >_< No Zell in sexual context...

U should change the summery gerily~ ^___^

Thanks for the ride thus far, I'll definitely check out yer other stories though. Yer a really groood writer~~~ :3

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I wibble, muchly.

This story is just so amazing. I've never come across GF!Seifer before, and he's absolutely fascinating! I love the plot in this, and the fact that you're fleshing out the story and not going 1, 2, 3, sex. (1 being meet, 2 being argue/fight and 3 being falling in lust) It makes everything ever so much more delicious. Oh the anticipation! The interaction! The angst! The fun!

The characterisation of Seifer is amazing, especially since you've managed to convey his changes whilst keeping him in character. I have to admit that Squall is my favourite character ever, but this Seifer is teetering just next to/below him. --grin--

God! There's so much I love about this story! I just can't put it all into words.

I am really looking forward to where you're taking us next.

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...Er...btw, if you're not doing SxS, I don't suppose I can sway you into possibly thinking about Irvine/Squall can I?

Ever hopeful, and loving this fic to bits (it's gone on my rec list!),

~Shi-koi~

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It's okay if it's not Seifer/Squall, but please, please don't make Squall go anywhere near Zell. He's nice and everything, but he's not one of my favorite characters. Irvine is okay. I can handle Irvine. I guess it doesn't really matter to me if it is Zell, I'm still interested in the story. And the fact that there's no sex, that doesn't bother me either. Do what you want; I'll read it anyway.

I'm really sad to hear that this won't end up being SeiferxSquall, as it would have been an amazing fic. I really can't stand Squall with anyone else, but I will keep reading since it's a interesting fic :)

Well, I don't care. There are many others that are full of hot sexy action but they do not have stories like this. I look forward to your stories. They are good and with sense. They are satisfying to people like me who likes reading fanfiction with less of kinky action. I'll be honest that I was disappointed that there will be no Squall/Seifer action or any other pairings out here who will be having hot kinky sex but the story without a nice plot will be useless. Please continue o write this story and surprise us with more to come.

I will be patient and wait :-)

I will also add you onto my Livejournal friends list, so I can see (and maybe make fun of) any silly flamers.

...I'll be honest. I think I may have been scared off by the sudden now Squall/Not Seifer change.
I was really looking forward to seeing how exactly Seifer and Squall were going to eventually get together, hoping it would be a long, drawn out process. Give me time to get really into the story before it happened... and now. Anything else will just be really disapointing.

I like the way you write, so maybe once it's been long enough that I've forgotten what this story was about originally... I'd like to come back and read it... but for now I just can't. :|