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Hey, at least you know you have three loyal readers! Yay plot!

And nice plot-twist! And nice room!

I understand, btw. My smut, even if I start in media res, always develops plot, characterization, back stories...sad, really. You'd think we were real writers or something! :grin:

Good story, keep writing!

Well, wasn't this a surprise! I got like 3 new chapters all at once! XD I'm so HAPPY you updated this!!!! *does a dance* It's getting interesting, what with the possibility of Squall becoming President Squall! LOL that sounds funny to me. And I like the plot thank you. Keep it that way, who gives a shit about those immature people who only want sex. While it's good, plot only makes it sweeter once you finally get to it and I'm REALLY looking forward to the sexes when it comes. I do hope you keep it main Seifer/Squall though; (because really, thats the whole reason for reading this!) I'm still trying to figure out how you're gonna do that. XP And I can just see the chaos that is going to ensue when Seifer shows up in Esthar. >.< Oh man, what a day for them huh? Poor Seifer.

Anyway, keep up the awsome work, can't wait for more!

More! More! More! :-D

Aww that was nice and unexpected of Squall! I guess, Squall isn't materialistic, so what would he do with all that money, anyway? It's nice that he was thinking about Selphie when he agreed. And Squall next in line to be president? I don't know. That'll be crazy, and I can't imagine him liking it all that much, but I guess we'll see. Anyway, good job. Can't wait for more (even though Squall and Seifer aren't getting together :( )

Hey, I enjoy plot with my smut! :grin:

The story is progressing well...wonder what Squall will find in Esthar...

Have you decided on the pairing? You were up in the air at one time. Or are you keeping it a surprise?

And everything comes back to Seifer! Good job on this chapter, you've drawn me even more. I am curious to find out how this is all going to connect in the future--Seifer's being a GF, Seifer's fear, Squall's suicide mission, and now going to FH. Keep up the good work!

Your warning about lack of smut for a long while is really amusing.
This story is more than interesting enough to continue reading in the mean time.

I really like the idea behind this, also. I can't wait for more.

Hey,

nuts to the people that don't want plot! I mean, smut is great and all, but plot makes it all the more awesome! And your plot certainly is shaping up to verrrrry interesting indeed!

Great to see two updates in quick succession, after a little break, I was worried you'd dropped the fic! Anyway, I really love the direction the fic is taking, look forward to more updates, good luck!

xx

Take your time for the smut, I like the rythm of this story. As long as you update often of course :-D

Yay! An update. Good job on this chapter. I'm angry at Cid for being stupid and sending Squall on a suicide mission without thinking about his wellbeing--and with a workaholic like Squall, you have to think about his wellbeing for him because he certainly won't--but I suppose he's a mercenary and that's expected. Anyway, what is Seifer going to do in Squall's absence, I wonder? I guess I'll just have to read the next chapter and find out.