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A good story doesn't need smut, and if there's smut somewhere within the pages, then it's a bonus. A good bonus. Besides, around this time in the story, any type of smut would be... awkward. They are both facing inner demons that, I think, need to be dealt with a little more thoroughly before they allow the other in. This chapter is a good example, since Seifer and Squall sat in a long silence because neither knew how do deal with the fear--Squall didn't know how to deal with someone else's fear while Seifer clearly couldn't deal with someone else knowing that he could feel fear. Anyway, I feel a little unnerved at Squall's departure from Seifer's room. I really wished they tried sorting things out a little, but that would be too out of character for both. :( Good job on this chapter and I hope you've got another coming soon!

Wow, this is really good. And you left it right there. I guess it wasn't really a cliff hanger, but I was just reading one chapter right after another and was getting really into it, and then I realized that it ended right at chapter 7! *sigh* well, anyway, good job on this story. Can't wait for more. btw, I really like the idea you had, about making Seifer a GF. That was really unexpected and really original. Kudos. You've drawn me with it.

This is a very interesting story. Unique ideas, very clever. I like it. I like how you write it how you play the game, but some of it a little too unrealistic. Like the computer inputting Seifer into the system... it sort of didn't make sense. The magics and healing though, and the limit breaks, I liked that. I'd really love to see more of this and how you plan to build their relationship. Please continue with more!

loving the story line its very original squal/seifer is a great pair. hope u write more faster lol

Really like where you are going with this. Very interesting idea and a nice smooth read.

yay you updated!!! i still like it very much... poor squall, he's so lost...

Great fic... the idea that Seifer is a GF is very unique, love his limit break
Look forward for more fighting scene on Seifer new skills as a GF.
Hope you will be updating soon ^-^

I really like this story and the direction it's going. XD I love how you've characterized Seifer after the war's over. I hope you post more chapters soon!

Good stuff! Keep going! :-)

Wow! Just wow! I'm REALLY loving this fic so far! What an awesome idea having Seifer become a GF! Though are you gonna explain why Ifrit wasn't there, and hopefully Fujin and Raijin will come back to Garden too...
Anyways, can't wait for another update!!