rate_review Reviews

I love your Rikku Ala Mode stories and cannot wait for the next installment. However, I think they would have done much better as an anthology, that is a single "master" story split into parts that can be added to whenever you desire. Thus, I think you should (eventually) combine them into a single story. By the way, you might want to delete one of the "original" stories as you seem to have double posted it.

Very nice. Short'n'sweet, as they say. There are a few typos here and there, but nothing big.

So... yeah. I enjoyed it. I wouldn't have minded reading about what exactly Rikku lost for her to be tonight's sub or how she and Yuna entered this particular relationship, but it's pretty good even without such trifling details.