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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't appprove of all this, 'treat the star like dirt' nonsense. Poor Cloud. He needs a sugar daddy who loves him and treats him like the delicate snowflake that he is!!!!! SEPPPPPHHYYYY!!
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, I love Zacks personality! I cant wait to read more!
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHH Sephiroth is so sweet! odsidjas I can't wait for them to fall in loooove! Classy, sister, CLASSY!
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
L.O.L. Zack is soo going to be in for it... I can't wait to watch him start to run his mouth on Sephiroth's crush. That just looks to be so promisingly hilarious. Poor Seph though. There's only one thing I have to point out, and it's that you spelled 'Disturbia' wrong. It's supposed to be spelled with a 'u' in the middle, not an 'e'. Other than that, fantastic start, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
~Whip~
~Whip~
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really different. I love it! Hope to see more, soon! XD XD
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeeek! Good to see there is more! And yes, I totally understand about drying out after having so much ideas...I hit several of those little roadbumps with my own story but I have finally got it to the beginning of the finale (only took it 52 freakin chapters). Of course, as luck would have it, I have hit another of those roadblocks. *grumbles about fickle muses*
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much. You've captured the characters well, and the setting is intriguing. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please tell me you are going to do more...this is just... wow, never thought the General would be one for ballet...damn