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for Lion Play

by Shehanitan

person dekor
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your threesome pairings, you write so sexually, and I can honestly say you write sex better than I've ever read it before! I'd love to see some more of you FF8 SxSxZ fics! :DDD please? lol
person Salamandor
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh goddd this story was so hot! PLEASE write more! And also, hahaha I bet that means Seifer would make SeeD, with not going up to the tower. hehehee I like the way you think.
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Hot, hot story here, what with the sex-right-in-the-middle-of-a-square thing xD horny Squall = fun Squall. The only weird thing was all the "Hyne" thing thrown about, since they never talk about him like that in the game at all, he's sometimes considered 'a' god, not 'the' god, but other than this little detail, this is one of my favorites so far.
person ffsr90
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
find the encouragement! Find it! *fans self* so hot
person kuriqa
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omj that is just too fucking hot!!!!! i want more please write more!!! i really liked how you had them situated when it was the three of them at the end and the whole thing about seifer being big and how the hell was squall going to take in that much! it was more realistic the way you did it, and i like how you used parts of the actual game for this, made it seem as if this could have happened (in every yaoi lovers dream maybe > < ) i also loved seifer's shockedness at squall groping him > < that was priceless > < good story thank you for submitting!
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person juri
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just came across your fics and this was SO hot! I don't often find SxS threesome fics with Zell too appealing, but I liked this one very much. This uke Squall is just mind-numbingly sexy. Trying to stay truer to characters and setting is always a HUGE plus, so one can really imagine *them* in the scene/setting and not just names and faces.

I also enjoyed Forest daytrip a lot. I really liked Seifer in that one, and the dynamic between them. I guess I'm finding the NC-laced fics not as satisfying.

Great stuff, I truly hope you get the motivation to put the rest of those ideas into writing!
person trifota
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story to bits! Hot threesome is amazingly hot. XD Hope to see more of this.
person animekid
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fuck I'm still drooling over this shit....

man it was hot....*cough cough* and I don't normally read FF8 smut

but damn

.......

*decides to read it again just to get wetter*

make more
person Sage
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It was hot. Now I'm not sure about these three because it's always more about squll and sifer than zell. I never liked that cause zell is my fav but yours was good really good you should write more
person that one chick ... yeah
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drool*

YES, write them down, plz.

*brain on vacation*