rate_review Reviews

Hot and juicy! Love it!

Hot smut. A little rough in spots -- I kept looking for paragraph breaks, and the editor/nitpicker side of my brain was pinging in the background -- but the animal brain was eminently satisfied, and you kept them just enough IC for it to work. I like your rather rough Auron. Too many fanfic writers (perhaps even myself) make him too kind, too personal, when he's more often presented as a force of nature.

Request, if you ever get the itch to write in this fandom again: write that Auron x Lulu you mention in your profile. I'd like to see what you do with TWO forces of nature. Lulu looks like she wouldn't mind it rough, and might bite back.

Now that's an interesting take on things.