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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Erm... WOW. So I just lost an hour on my dissertation but it was entirely worth it! :D I can't believe you don't have more reviews for this story because you truly deserve them. Your characterisation is excellent - particularly of Zack and Sephiroth - and I love the plot itself. And I agree with the above reviewer, the Cloud/Zack scene was *swoons* hehe. Please continue to write, I sense a suitably angsty and dramatic climax and I can't wait for the next update! Thanks for uploading such a great story, it always makes my day when I manage to get lost in a great fic :)
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to create an account when I read this story just so I could review it. I absolutely love this. I love how Zack is portrayed despite all the horrid things happening to him. The characters are played very well and the plot is none to shabby either.
I'd have to say I liked the ZackXCloud lemon the best. I'm a very big fan of that shipping. The tenderness and fear that was put together in a way that really hits the heart. You can really feel the sensitivity they felt towards each other in being afraid of hurting the other.
I know this may be the only review you've recieved on this story and as a fellow author I know that can be discouraging, but if this is the only one that makes it worth all the hard work then I have to beg that you contine. I really look forward to getting on the site and seeing this story uploaded.
I'd have to say I liked the ZackXCloud lemon the best. I'm a very big fan of that shipping. The tenderness and fear that was put together in a way that really hits the heart. You can really feel the sensitivity they felt towards each other in being afraid of hurting the other.
I know this may be the only review you've recieved on this story and as a fellow author I know that can be discouraging, but if this is the only one that makes it worth all the hard work then I have to beg that you contine. I really look forward to getting on the site and seeing this story uploaded.