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for Pater Familias

by Savaial

schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another excellent piece of work, i know i havent been on here n while a lot of stuff happened hope you finish this soon
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Hugs* Glad to finally hear from you! Hope you're doing much better, being sick sucks on so many levels. I'm so glad to read an update, hope to see more soon when you're feeling up to it. ♥
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As someone who checked here every night for new chapters, I'm glad to see you updated again. It didn't seem like you to abandon all of a suddden. Sorry to hear you've been sick though... but it's great you're doing better now. Just don't overwork yourself, m',kay ^_~
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY, you're back! I hope you're health gets better. So the seduction continues, i can't wait for the next installment. And now i REALLY want some ice cream.
person Ranna
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you're not feeling so good. I hope that you will continue to get better. And, of course, bring me FFVII goodness.
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For me, nothing in a story is better than getting into the minds of the characters and exploring their psyches, and you have an extremely special touch for that. And your OC's fit well without disturbing the flow of things and are in-depth, well thought out creatures that have psyches of their own to explore, and you've managed to create believable personalities for characters that most people would be hard-pressed to explore to such an extent.

Oh, and the lemons are HOT. >.> ^_^

PTB used to be my favorite fic on AFF. Now this is rapidly trying to take its place- I'm looking forward to seeing where things go.

And wondering to myself- will there ever be an Eldon Garchae fic? >.>
person RJaneyP
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear Savaial,

Sometimes I want to get lost in your HoJo's world and not come back, Love the way you go from the serious to funny within a paragraph... the tech thing with the rat was hilarious...it was suppose to be funny wasn't it? Don't let Ink eat them...they'd give kitty gas!

Never end your story...just keep writing it forever, Luv, G
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...Lasagna... my favorite ♥ ^,^ I can imagine that there will be a horrid stench in the lab due to the people eating and giant rat feces xP yuck. lol Can't wait to read more, as usual. ;3
person Savaial
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sephcounttheways, Thanks! Wanted that to be a little warm. Thanks for the R & R!

Ranna, thank you. Want the hotness. I sooooo want the hotness! Sephy better be supportive during torturous times! He knows all about it! YOu like Sakura's POV? It keeps happening. What tournament?? Registered on the LJ account you posted. Keeping my fingers crossed.

hunewearl, Periodic table is sooo needed when a resident mad scientist is trying to control himself. Yuffie will come back, so don't worry. Glad you liked Sephy's advertizing. I loved writing that bit. Keeping the honess flowing! Awkwardness is the key. It gets spicy soon.

Lamica. thank so much! You know, I love your art, and it does inspire me to keep writing. I think most men would be over the moon to have that sort of attention at any time, lol. I wish I could draw. But, since I can't, I'll just look at your stuff.

To all my silent readers, thank you, too. You may not review, but I see your hit count and I appreciate that you read my paltry leavings.
person Ranna
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A giant mutated rat. Ehhhhhh. Yuck.