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by Savaial

person Savaial
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DS, I'm glad to here you're gonna stick around ;-)
I Wasn't a big fan of slash either, for awhile, then I caught the bug. As for the voices thing, I really can't bear to hear Hojo as a cartoony kook. Yeah, both women are pregnant. I've got Tifa with Barett right now, not Cloud. I think Barett's quite capable, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Ranna, it would screw with anybody, I think. I couldn't bear to be attracted to my one-time worst enemy. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

lauren, thank you for saying so. I'll keep it up. Thank you for the R&R!

sephcounttheways, Aerith will break the news soon, never fear. As for poor Cloud's love life, you know it will have to be turbulent. Stick around for more drama. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Savannah, good to know you root for the spikey-headed hero. I'm so glad you liked Hojo's little torture scene. I want a Hojo, too. I guess we'll have to contact Silver Nightmare Industries. And don't worry, Aerith gonna tell her baby-daddy. God, I just love that phrase. Thanks for reading and reviewing, girl! Love to hear from you.
person DS
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Aerith has to fear; even a moody Seph can't take the news that bad, since her getting pregnant was half anticipated from the start. If not, time for the happy couple to invest in better birth control. Considering his virility, she could be having babies back to back till menopause. :o

Oh, thanks for clearing that up about Cloud, I remember reading in PTB that Tifa was his girlfriend, I didn't know it had changed. That's good; I agree that Barret is more capable. Not the best role model for certain, but he is a good father. That much we know. Cloud on the other hand... eh... too many issues...
person Savaial
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ranna, Cloud will be okay. Sephy won't hurt him. Don't really look for Cloud/Sephiroth slash in this fic. I'll do something else for that later, I swear. Thanks for the R&R!



sephcounttheways, thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you're liking Hojo's internal monologues so far. As for the insect repellent, both Seph and his daddy had a little...communication going on with that.... Yeah, Seph was trying to help his dad, but possibly not the way it looked at first, lol.




Savannah! Hey!
Truthfully, I was going to email you with notification, but my email crashed and I can't access my addresses. A week I've been dealing with that. Jeez.

Glad you're liking this so far. I realize there's only a few of us that dig Daddy Evil. I think Sakura will wear on you, like a fungus, lol. Give her a chance!

I love Cloud. He seems like he's so ripe for a bit of schizophrenic interpretation.

Glad to see you, sooooo much my friend.

You'll see the sephy spawn eventually, never fear.

Thanks for the read and review, girl!
P.S., enjoying the swamp cold in your supposedly sunny state?
person DS
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna stick with this fig regardless of whose POV it's in. I was hoping for some more Aeriseph action because I'm a big sucker for that pairing. Never been much of a Yaoi girl myself... not sure why though. I just prefer Het couplings.

I do agree that the Japanese voice for Hojo is more bearable, but I've come to expect that. The original voices usually out do the dubs. In any case, I can't really complain about the job that Paul Eiding does. I think he fits Hojo's character well... even if the result is unpleasant.

So Aerith is pregnant now, and Tifa too, right? I remember there being something about pregnancy symptoms in one of the early chapters. Damn, she'll have it bad now that Cloud is coming out of the closet. She needs to find herself a more capable man, one without all the angst drama. -_-;;
person Ranna
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Being insanely attracted to Sephiroth screws Cloud up. Why am I n ot surprised?
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a incredible writer, keep it up.
person Ranna
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Regular romance sucks. It's so hard to manage and you never know if you've got a psycho on your hands. But with Hojo, you know what you're getting into. Well, sorta.
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL Hojo won the lottery!! Wonder what he's gonna do with all of it 0_o That's a lot of flow.

Sakura is cool, I always like your female OCs.
person DS
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading PTB last night, I can't remember the last time I read a fic that long without losing interest; you're amazing! I'm also thrilled to find you have a sequel up so soon. I can't wait to read more - one question though, are you going to write any from Sephiroth's POV? Usually that disinterest me, but you have a wonderful way of characterizing his first person, I love it! Plus, it means more Aeriseph lemony goodness. *snickers*

Yeah, Hojo, I'm gonna admit he's not my favorite character. Though now that I think about it, I didn't mind him till I played DoC. Must have been his voice, I was muting my TV every time he came on. O_O
person Savaial
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ranna, yeah, regular romance is a bit formulaic. Boy meets girl, girl and boy fall in love, they have a break up and a reunite. Done. And, people like that most of the time. Honestly, I think a lot of what gets published these days is the sort of shit you don't care if you leave the novel on the airplane by accident.

Thanks for the read and review! And, yes, you know you're getting into a psycho love affair if you read about Hojo...




sephcounttheways, thanks for the R&R! Don't worry, he has good ways to spend his money. Thanks for the vote of confidence on my OC's. It's hard for me to write the perspective of the few females in FF7. Slim pickings...





DS, Thanks for the review on Paper Tiger Burning. That was one of my bigger fics, which took effort to keep semi-tight. As for keeping in Seph's POV, Pater Familias is in Hojo's POV, and, eventually, Sakura's as well. If you want more Seph, I do have a slash fic with him and Cloud called Mastered Materia. And, I'll eventually do another Seph-centric fic.

Hojo is not popular with a lot of people. The stereotype of the mad scientist is usually enough to keep people from getting into him. Aside from that, his culpability in canon is unpleasant. Still, I love the underplayed underdog. Try to stick with this fic and you might find yourself liking him a little more. Maybe not. He gets violent.

BTW, the original voice actor for Hojo in DoC is a lot better. Nachi Nozawa was Vexen in Kingdom Hearts and Shido in Devil May Cry, amoung many other roles. The English speaking audience got treated to a loony version, because we expect that of our mad scientists...

That was Paul Eiding, btw, Max Tennyson in "Ben 10", and Colonel Roy Campbell in the Metal Gear Solid video game series.